Our Love It Feels As One

I looked into your eyes
And I was captivated
But when I put my hands on your thighs
I made me get rejuvenated

Whenever I put my heart in your hand
You treated it with tenderness
Hope this goes as we planned
We will use no carelessness

To get married on a mountaintop
Or get married in a church
Know our love will never stop
Like two love birds on a perch

Does not matter what you’ve done
Or who you were before
When we get married we are one
We are not alone not anymore

No matter what I’ve done
Or even where I’ve been
Our love it feels as one
Like a love I’ve never seen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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November 25, 2009 at 8:43 AM
this has a really good rhyme to it and great rhythm! Lovely poem. No matter where it is, as long there is love it doesn't matter!
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