James Fraser Poet Lyric

Our Love Is Right

0UR LOVE IS RIGHT


Now that I've found you, I'll not let you go
Life was going nowhere, with you it just flows
Times we spend heals my empty-bleeding heart
I'll never allow a day, for you to ever depart


Darling, your love place me on my fire 
Hearing you speak, I don't get tired
Since I've known you, I get wired 
Tell me when can I hold you tight 
Tell me when can I hug you might 
Tell me when can I kiss you light?
Tell me, darling, our love is right...


Feelings of missing you doesn't color blue
Instead it brushed hues of paradise view
It pleasures me, I hymn our united theme
I, a songbird, lured ears to stop and hear


Each time you close those bright eyes 
I am struck to behold with guise 
You must know I don't disguise
Tell me when can I hold you tight 
Tell me when can I hug you might 
Tell me when can I kiss you light?
Tell me, darling, our love is right...


Gazing at you, I see a vista of life
winsome smile melting all my strife 
Hearing you, my heart leaps so tall
Like Autumn leaves, am ready to fall


Barriers broken  as hearts and lips talk
To ocean of motions we take each walk
True love flowered, said by our own folks
Tell me when can I hold you tight 
Tell me when can I hug you might 
Tell me when can I kiss you light?
Tell me, darling, our love is right..



5:31pm, December 25, 2015

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Funom Makama January 14, 2016 at 11:30 AM #7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant

Chris Boskovski January 2, 2016 at 4:29 AM Beautiful lyric James, my friend, you've done yourself honor with this one! Great job! :) I enjoyed it very much! James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 2:11 PM Thank you Chris for your very kind comment. Wishing you a lovely weekend ~~ James :)

White Sage January 1, 2016 at 6:33 PM Nice lyric that is... James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 1:54 PM Many thanks 'white sage' ~~ James :)

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2016 at 3:48 PM Love has made you SO romantic, James!! Is this for the duet contest? Happy New Year, my friend. James Fraser January 8, 2016 at 1:47 PM Hiya Andrea, firstly belated Happy New Year to you. Thank you for your lovely comment, always appreciated. Wishing you a lovely weekend, hugs ~~ James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser December 31, 2015 at 3:33 AM Huge One, What an embroidered lines of our poems from fb.. =`) Huge one, please include the date of when it was written.. =`) hugs tight! we'll talk later.. ~Your little One, Olive Eloisa =`) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 6, 2016 at 9:27 PM we throw lots of put poetry lines at times but we just do not try to write them down, polish them and turn them to more.. =`) I love and miss those times.. hugs tight and smiles, Olive Eloisa xx James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 12:21 PM Love it when we throw lines at wach other, and love it even better when such a lovely poem comes from them ~~ hugs ~~ James xx

Poet Destroyer A December 30, 2015 at 4:12 PM James...Happy New Year ~LINDA~ James Fraser December 31, 2015 at 12:08 PM Thank you PD, wishing you a Happy New too ~~ James :)