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Our Love Is Right

0UR LOVE IS RIGHT Now that I've found you, I'll not let you go Life was going nowhere, with you it just flows Times we spend heals my empty-bleeding heart I'll never allow a day, for you to ever depart Darling, your love place me on my fire Hearing you speak, I don't get tired Since I've known you, I get wired Tell me when can I hold you tight Tell me when can I hug you might Tell me when can I kiss you light? Tell me, darling, our love is right... Feelings of missing you doesn't color blue Instead it brushed hues of paradise view It pleasures me, I hymn our united theme I, a songbird, lured ears to stop and hear Each time you close those bright eyes I am struck to behold with guise You must know I don't disguise Tell me when can I hold you tight Tell me when can I hug you might Tell me when can I kiss you light? Tell me, darling, our love is right... Gazing at you, I see a vista of life winsome smile melting all my strife Hearing you, my heart leaps so tall Like Autumn leaves, am ready to fall Barriers broken as hearts and lips talk To ocean of motions we take each walk True love flowered, said by our own folks Tell me when can I hold you tight Tell me when can I hug you might Tell me when can I kiss you light? Tell me, darling, our love is right.. 5:31pm, December 25, 2015

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Date: 1/14/2016 11:30:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Date: 1/2/2016 4:29:00 AM
Beautiful lyric James, my friend, you've done yourself honor with this one! Great job! :) I enjoyed it very much!
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James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 2:11:00 PM
Thank you Chris for your very kind comment. Wishing you a lovely weekend ~~ James :)
Date: 1/1/2016 6:33:00 PM
Nice lyric that is...
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James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 1:54:00 PM
Many thanks 'white sage' ~~ James :)
Date: 1/1/2016 3:48:00 PM
Love has made you SO romantic, James!! Is this for the duet contest? Happy New Year, my friend.
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James Fraser
Date: 1/8/2016 1:47:00 PM
Hiya Andrea, firstly belated Happy New Year to you. Thank you for your lovely comment, always appreciated. Wishing you a lovely weekend, hugs ~~ James :)
Date: 12/31/2015 3:33:00 AM
Huge One, What an embroidered lines of our poems from fb.. =`) Huge one, please include the date of when it was written.. =`) hugs tight! we'll talk later.. ~Your little One, Olive Eloisa =`)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/6/2016 9:27:00 PM
we throw lots of put poetry lines at times but we just do not try to write them down, polish them and turn them to more.. =`) I love and miss those times.. hugs tight and smiles, Olive Eloisa xx
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 12:21:00 PM
Love it when we throw lines at wach other, and love it even better when such a lovely poem comes from them ~~ hugs ~~ James xx
Date: 12/30/2015 4:12:00 PM
James...Happy New Year ~LINDA~
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James Fraser
Date: 12/31/2015 12:08:00 PM
Thank you PD, wishing you a Happy New too ~~ James :)