Our Love Is One In a Trillion

Trois Par Huit..Tanka..Rondel

You and me
Fell so passionately
And although we had no direct plan.

I just desired you to be my biggest fan.
Love can be beautiful between woman and man.
So as I close my eyes, I can see

We are a guarantee
Eternally!

So here we stand
Together as one; Forever!
Hold on to my hand.
And don't you dare let go!
Just let this love we share flow.....

Our love is one in a trillion,
And we make one helluva team;
Pinch yourself and you'll see this ain't a dream.
Open your eyes when I kiss your lips

I love to run my hands over the curves of your hips;
But I need to stick to my poetic theme-
Our love is one in a trillion,
And we make one helluva team!

You make my body tingle with your finger tips.
Baby you cause my body to scream.
Maybe you're right, and this is a dream.
A thousand sensations or more like a million.
Our love is one in a trillion!


Wrote for JP's contest "Trois Par Huit..Tanka...Rondel"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/8/2010 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Jimmy
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Date: 11/7/2010 2:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Jimmy in Jared Pickett's contest. Wishing you the best with your writing and winning in contests. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/7/2010 1:42:00 PM
Jimmy ..well deserved HM in contest. Gud usage of all three forms Luv/Best wishes....Hitendra Mehta cecil
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Date: 11/7/2010 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations Jimmy on a worthy poem's win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/7/2010 8:34:00 AM
Congrats Jimmy on your HM in Jared's contest with this superbly written entry my friend.. enjoy a special honor all your own today with lots of luv..
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Date: 11/7/2010 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your success in the contest, Jimmy! I was hoping to see this wonderful poem in the winners' circle. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/12/2010 8:04:00 AM
Excellent use of all three forms to convey the special quality of your love, Jimmy. Best wishes for success in Jared's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/12/2010 1:20:00 AM
Good luck in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/11/2010 11:19:00 PM
I wish you good luck in Jared's "Troi Par Huit...Tanka...Rondel" Contest, JAM. This was quite a challenge for me right now so I didn't attempt it. I enjoyed this.. Love, Audrey
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