Our Love Died

we once felt love
love for one another
we talk together
we laughed together
we both loved each other
then one day
just one day
everything went wrong
all the trust we had
just flew away
it flew away like a bird
with new wings
and out love died
you lied to me 
about you
about the OTHER
about your love for me
i thought our love was forever
but it never started
our love died
when i found out
i cried all day
you tried to explain
but you knew you couldn't
you said it was a mistake
that you didn't really love her
that she was just a play mate
but i didn't believe you
i couldn't trust you
i didn't want to believe it 
but it looked like you left me a long time ago
i left that one day
i ran
i ran as fast as i could
i didn't know where i was going
maybe an empty place
so i could just fill it with my tears
our love have never started
because every time i try to start it
you would just play along
so that i would think that you felt the same
when you knew you could never love me
i was just a show off for you friends
out love died
it ran away
it flew away
our love never started
so i felt like i never did

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007



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