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Our Love Ascends To Heaven

Heaven awaits til our last waltz amongst the wind, mimicking that of yesterdays...(Sigh) Nature applauds as we continue in harmony; never ceasing til the last tear. Dust we form... transcending to Heaven Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 09/05/2013 Contest Title: Just Nine Lines Visual #1 1st Place Winner

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/22/2019 1:01:00 PM

Wow! Again amazing!;)

Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 11/2/2019 12:13:00 PM

Thank you so much as I too admire your work.

Funom Makama

Date: 3/15/2014 1:57:00 PM

short, but cute and incisive... This is a lovely piece with deep lines. Thanks for the priceless share

Herzel Poshiwa

Date: 2/10/2014 4:07:00 AM

I love the sigh you put on there... that just explains how we feel if we are told and wish of heaven. I'm loving your poems

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/25/2013 10:14:00 AM

very very beautiful write.all the best for the contest.

Linda Jackson

Date: 9/16/2013 9:27:00 AM

A wonderfully written poem. Super. best wishes Linda x

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/16/2013 4:52:00 AM

sigh, this is just heavenly, pace... congrats on your shining win in my contest!..:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/13/2013 10:08:00 AM

A lovely win Ink...... always love LINDA

Cherie Thomas

Date: 9/12/2013 7:07:00 PM

Nine lines of true beauty,,,,lovely write ink :0) ~<3~ cherie

Cindy Lu

Date: 9/12/2013 1:33:00 PM

This is excellent! Enjoyable read!!! Cindy

Skat A

Date: 9/12/2013 8:05:00 AM

well done with the beauty from your pen. congrats ~SKAT~

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/11/2013 8:31:00 PM

Beautiful write! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Danesh Morgan

Date: 9/11/2013 8:03:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Morgan

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/11/2013 8:39:00 AM

congrats on this a amazing powerful poem,,

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/10/2013 8:12:00 PM

nicely done...the image took us in similar paths....congrats on your win :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 9/10/2013 5:27:00 PM

Congrats on your great win. I AM.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/10/2013 4:25:00 PM

Heavenly write! Congratulations.

David Nickle Read

Date: 9/9/2013 5:46:00 PM

That's a beautiful vision man, so much said that leads the mind to beauty, in such a way...great words. Read ;{>

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/9/2013 11:14:00 AM

thanks for being part of my gig, pace.. huggs!..:)

Holly Smith

Date: 9/9/2013 7:04:00 AM

This was heavenly. So uplifting and beautiful! Like a breath of fresh air.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/9/2013 4:05:00 AM

WOW VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/8/2013 9:17:00 AM

Pace, I love that dust line, lovely title as well. Wishing you the beat for Nette's contest. Hope you are having a fabulous weekend: *hugs*

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2013 9:49:00 PM

Nice entry. wish you good luck

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2013 1:51:00 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this very poetic poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 9/5/2013 10:09:00 AM

Wow....the your interpretation of this visual is exquisite. Well done! Hugs

Skat A

Date: 9/5/2013 8:00:00 AM

lovely Ink~ good luck............SKAT