Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Rictameter

Our Love Ascends To Heaven

Heaven 
awaits til our
last waltz amongst the wind,
mimicking that of yesterdays...(Sigh)
Nature applauds as we continue in
harmony; never ceasing til
the last tear. Dust we form...
transcending to
Heaven


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

09/05/2013

Contest Title: Just Nine Lines
Visual #1

1st Place Winner

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Brenda Chiri September 22, 2019 at 1:01 PM Wow! Again amazing!;) Pace Ink-U-Script November 2, 2019 at 12:13 PM Thank you so much as I too admire your work.

Funom Makama March 15, 2014 at 1:57 PM short, but cute and incisive... This is a lovely piece with deep lines. Thanks for the priceless share

Herzel Poshiwa February 10, 2014 at 4:07 AM I love the sigh you put on there... that just explains how we feel if we are told and wish of heaven. I'm loving your poems

Kenisha Shines September 25, 2013 at 10:14 AM very very beautiful write.all the best for the contest.

Linda Jackson September 16, 2013 at 9:27 AM A wonderfully written poem. Super. best wishes Linda x

Nette Onclaud September 16, 2013 at 4:52 AM sigh, this is just heavenly, pace... congrats on your shining win in my contest!..:) huggs

Poet Destroyer A September 13, 2013 at 10:08 AM A lovely win Ink...... always love LINDA

Cherie Thomas September 12, 2013 at 7:07 PM Nine lines of true beauty,,,,lovely write ink :0) ~<3~ cherie

Cindy Lu September 12, 2013 at 1:33 PM This is excellent! Enjoyable read!!! Cindy

Skat A September 12, 2013 at 8:05 AM well done with the beauty from your pen. congrats ~SKAT~

Kim Merryman September 11, 2013 at 8:31 PM Beautiful write! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

Danesh Morgan September 11, 2013 at 8:03 PM Congrats on your win. Morgan

Harry Horsman September 11, 2013 at 8:39 AM congrats on this a amazing powerful poem,,

Sandra Adams September 10, 2013 at 8:12 PM nicely done...the image took us in similar paths....congrats on your win :)

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu September 10, 2013 at 5:27 PM Congrats on your great win. I AM.

Richard Lamoureux September 10, 2013 at 4:25 PM Heavenly write! Congratulations.

David Nickle Read September 9, 2013 at 5:46 PM That's a beautiful vision man, so much said that leads the mind to beauty, in such a way...great words. Read ;{>

Nette Onclaud September 9, 2013 at 11:14 AM thanks for being part of my gig, pace.. huggs!..:)

Holly Smith September 9, 2013 at 7:04 AM This was heavenly. So uplifting and beautiful! Like a breath of fresh air.

Liam Mcdaid September 9, 2013 at 4:05 AM WOW VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE

Wilma Neels September 8, 2013 at 9:17 AM Pace, I love that dust line, lovely title as well. Wishing you the beat for Nette's contest. Hope you are having a fabulous weekend: *hugs*

Dr.Ram Mehta September 5, 2013 at 9:49 PM Nice entry. wish you good luck

Sara Kendrick September 5, 2013 at 1:51 PM Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this very poetic poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Cecilia Macfarlane September 5, 2013 at 10:09 AM Wow....the your interpretation of this visual is exquisite. Well done! Hugs

Skat A September 5, 2013 at 8:00 AM lovely Ink~ good luck............SKAT