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Our Love Ascends To Heaven

Heaven 
awaits til our
last waltz amongst the wind,
mimicking that of yesterdays...(Sigh)
Nature applauds as we continue in
harmony; never ceasing til
the last tear. Dust we form...
transcending to
Heaven


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

09/05/2013

Contest Title: Just Nine Lines
Visual #1

1st Place Winner

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Brenda Chiri Date: 9/22/2019 1:01:00 PM Wow! Again amazing!;) Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 11/2/2019 12:13:00 PM Thank you so much as I too admire your work.

Funom Makama Date: 3/15/2014 1:57:00 PM short, but cute and incisive... This is a lovely piece with deep lines. Thanks for the priceless share Login to Reply

Herzel Poshiwa Date: 2/10/2014 4:07:00 AM I love the sigh you put on there... that just explains how we feel if we are told and wish of heaven. I'm loving your poems Login to Reply

Kenisha Shines Date: 9/25/2013 10:14:00 AM very very beautiful write.all the best for the contest. Login to Reply

Linda Jackson Date: 9/16/2013 9:27:00 AM A wonderfully written poem. Super. best wishes Linda x Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/16/2013 4:52:00 AM sigh, this is just heavenly, pace... congrats on your shining win in my contest!..:) huggs Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/13/2013 10:08:00 AM A lovely win Ink...... always love LINDA Login to Reply

Cherie Thomas Date: 9/12/2013 7:07:00 PM Nine lines of true beauty,,,,lovely write ink :0) ~<3~ cherie Login to Reply

Cindy Lu Date: 9/12/2013 1:33:00 PM This is excellent! Enjoyable read!!! Cindy Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/12/2013 8:05:00 AM well done with the beauty from your pen. congrats ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 9/11/2013 8:31:00 PM Beautiful write! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim Login to Reply

Danesh Morgan Date: 9/11/2013 8:03:00 PM Congrats on your win. Morgan Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/11/2013 8:39:00 AM congrats on this a amazing powerful poem,, Login to Reply

Sandra Adams Date: 9/10/2013 8:12:00 PM nicely done...the image took us in similar paths....congrats on your win :) Login to Reply

Alozor Michael Ikechukwu Date: 9/10/2013 5:27:00 PM Congrats on your great win. I AM. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 9/10/2013 4:25:00 PM Heavenly write! Congratulations. Login to Reply

David Nickle Read Date: 9/9/2013 5:46:00 PM That's a beautiful vision man, so much said that leads the mind to beauty, in such a way...great words. Read ;{> Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/9/2013 11:14:00 AM thanks for being part of my gig, pace.. huggs!..:) Login to Reply

Holly Smith Date: 9/9/2013 7:04:00 AM This was heavenly. So uplifting and beautiful! Like a breath of fresh air. Login to Reply

Liam Mcdaid Date: 9/9/2013 4:05:00 AM WOW VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 9/8/2013 9:17:00 AM Pace, I love that dust line, lovely title as well. Wishing you the beat for Nette's contest. Hope you are having a fabulous weekend: *hugs* Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 9/5/2013 9:49:00 PM Nice entry. wish you good luck Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 9/5/2013 1:51:00 PM Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this very poetic poem..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Cecilia Macfarlane Date: 9/5/2013 10:09:00 AM Wow....the your interpretation of this visual is exquisite. Well done! Hugs Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 9/5/2013 8:00:00 AM lovely Ink~ good luck............SKAT Login to Reply