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At the end, but not within, the Bride and Groom says together...I love you!

The beginning is a neverending romance, which is until the end of time.  Congratulations to the Bride and Groom of this Ballad!

~Oblivion Dark Sunshine - Poetry Diva - Verlena S. Walker~

 

(Groom speaks...)
In this world are things to contemplate.
Therefore, life can be complicated.
Stairs we must climb to overcome conflict.
Heaven is an open door of realities.
As my adoration of you is metaphoric, 
I am blessed that you feel the same.
We are together as one.
Our passion flows.
Our ardor is aglow.

(Bride speaks...)
In this life are confrontations.
We must address our demons to form our inner being.
Nothing is more than the characteristic of self-worth.
I see yours darling and it is me.
May I be shallow in the passion I feel?
I adore you.
I am yours.
Let’s share this with the world.

(Groom speaks...)
I asked you to marry me.
You said yes.
My head start spinning.
I felt the depth in my chest.
Our marriage vows have been written.
Our big day has come.
I am your man.
You are my woman.

(The Groom says his written vows.…)
Complicated the world may be.
Our time together will be cherished by the passion we feel.
You are my paradise and my sunshine.
I am yours until the end of time.
Our life, as one, is intertwine with all aspects.
As a tree grows, so does our lust.
As a river flows, so does our thirst.
As a meadow brooks the crows, so does our fascination accept our conundrums.
I will ardor you forever.

(The Bride says her written vows.…)
Complicated the world is.
Our time together we cherish.
You are my sunshine and my paradise.
I am yours until the end of time.
Our life, as one, interweaves.
Life aspects will challenge each.
Our fervor defeats all our troubles.
As landscape flourish, so does our lust.
As lea bravado, so does our thirst.
As a meadow brooks the crows, so does our infatuation withstand any rival.
Our ardor is dominance.
Our ardor is exuberance.

(Bride speaks...)
I adore you my man!

(Groom speaks...)
And I, adore you my woman!

(Music continues to play in the background until the symphony ends.)
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PENNED ON SEPTEMBER 04, 2014!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/8/2014 11:51:00 AM
Verlena, this is such a beautiful, romantic piece! You out did yourself, my friend! Congratulations on a well-deserved wonderful win! Pandita
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Date: 10/8/2014 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Pandita for your superlative response. Verlena
Date: 9/30/2014 1:20:00 PM
Beautifully written. Congratulations on your win Verlena
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Date: 9/30/2014 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Brenda for your congratulations. Verlena
Date: 9/28/2014 7:06:00 AM
- Verlena, congrats with your lovely winning poem - A superb 2nd place !!! - Enjoying reading your poem - Have a nice Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise for your superlative remark... Verlena
Date: 9/28/2014 5:53:00 AM
Lovely write on everlasting love with good vows, Verlena. congrats
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Date: 9/28/2014 2:01:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Ram for your super-awesome remark and the congratulations! Verlena
Date: 9/27/2014 12:24:00 PM
What a beautiful poem Verena. Congratulations on your win. I will add this to my favs.
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:40:00 PM
Thanks Maurice for your awesome response and your congratulations. Now I must journey off to see how high I placed. Verlena
Date: 9/27/2014 11:20:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:40:00 PM
I love your contests Judy. My entries will be seen often. Smile, Verlena.
Date: 9/27/2014 10:55:00 AM
Wow that's so unique n brilliant Verlena! Loved ur eloquent write much! Congrats on big win my dear!
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:41:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma on your congratulations and super-awesome remarks. Verlena
Date: 9/27/2014 8:38:00 AM
beautifully penned Verlena - I love your unique take on the theme:-) many congrats hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 9/27/2014 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Jan for your awesome response and congratulations. Verlena
Date: 9/10/2014 4:28:00 PM
These are gorgeous vows of everlasting love! Wow..beautiful, Verlena!! Is this perhaps for Craig Cornish's contest....lovely !!! PS.....I must thank you so much for the high placement in your contest! I'm so pleased you liked my poem!
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Date: 9/11/2014 6:38:00 PM
Thanks for the awesome response Carrie. We had a power failure in Detroit, MI for two days; therefore, I have not sent out my congratulations but I will being doing this shortly. Sending you a smile, Verlena...
Date: 9/10/2014 10:40:00 AM
wonderful in romantic sentences
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Date: 9/10/2014 11:25:00 AM
Thanks for your awesome response Bianca... Verlena
Date: 9/8/2014 4:08:00 AM
Excellent. Well expressed poem. Enjoyed reading it.Tfs
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Date: 9/8/2014 4:34:00 AM
Thanks Ravi for your superlative response. Verlena
Date: 9/7/2014 5:18:00 AM
Really great work.. reflects a great poet.. hugs
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Date: 9/7/2014 6:05:00 PM
Thanks Malik for this superlative response and super-awesome remark. Verlena
Date: 9/5/2014 3:23:00 PM
What an absolute beautiful poem Verlena. Such depth expressing love.
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Date: 9/5/2014 4:03:00 PM
Thanks for this superlative response Brenda... Verlena
Date: 9/5/2014 1:53:00 PM
You are a great poet and artist
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Date: 9/5/2014 4:04:00 PM
Thanks Keith for your super-awesome remarks... Verlena
Date: 9/5/2014 5:31:00 AM
All the ingredients are there for a great love to blossom! May the beauty of your verse beautify farther your heart for to compose a symphony worthy of your feelings! Marvelously expressed, dear Verlena!
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Date: 9/5/2014 12:48:00 PM
Thanks Demetrious for your superlative response. Verlena
Date: 9/4/2014 8:50:00 PM
WOW............Providence must adore and Bless such awesome love Verlena. I wonder what they wear...such a romantic and sincere radian e in they're bond and vows, this just aweinspiring! " As the meadow brooks the crows, so does our infatuation withstand any rival..." yes, rival for our attention , our passion, our protection which you delineate with aplomb in the begining, the conflicts & confrontations that rival in many forms. BEAUTIFUL! a FAV. J.A.B.
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Date: 9/4/2014 8:54:00 PM
Thanks for making this a favorite Justin. This was written for a wedding to come... I enjoy your super-awesome responses and remarks. Sending a smile, Verlena