Our Love

OUR LOVE...
WHEN YOU TOUCH ME 
I QUIVER WITH NERVES,
YOUR HANDS SO STRONG,
AND SO SUPERB.
MY JUICES ARE FLOWING LIKE,
THE WATER THAT FALLS.
WITH THOUGHTS OF PASSION,
TO GIVE MY ALL.
AS YOU KISS MY BACK,
DOWN TO MY STACK!
YOUR MOVEMENTS SO DEEP,
AS YOU PENETRATE STEEP.
I HOLD ON, SO TIGHT,
FOR A NEVER ENDING NIGHT!
LOOKING INTO YOUR EYE'S
THAT, GLEAM, SUPREME.
CANDLE LIGHTS, SMOKE FILLED,
OUR ROOM WITH STEAM!!
I OPEN MY BODY,
FOR YOUR THOUGHTS TO ENTER.
LIKE THE SUMMER OF LOVE.
IN THE MIDDLE OF WINTER.
BY: SHI RICKS
Motif- Romantic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 26, 2014 at 9:37 PM
SHI, thank you for setting the music and the mood with your winning. Poem. Congratulations:) Take Care ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 4:07 AM
Enjoyed your write on mood music and congrats on the win,shi
Harper Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 1:03 AM
Congratulations on your win Shi--this was a really tough batch to judge, all so well written. I appreciated yours for your hot mood. Thanks for entering my contest.
Sergi Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 5:13 PM
SHI great moving work ! I enjoyed it.
Maverick Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations here Shi on the win..'
Mehta Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Enjoyed the poem and congrats on the win, shi
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February 12, 2014 at 3:11 AM
- Another contest sponsored by: Giorgio V. - "Impress me IV" - CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM,SHI - ENJOYABLE TO READ YOURS AND A PLEASURE TO PARTICIPATE :))) - Anne-Lise :)
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February 10, 2014 at 2:47 PM
SHI, wow...this sure puts the heat, melting the cold away.. Mighty romantic... SKAT
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