Sara Kendrick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

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Our Love

Your brown eyes compel
Bring out this desire
Wishing to hide in
Your lapel, maybe  
Upon a high wire
  
You touch the bell
Sparks will fly high
From your soft hand
Igniting flames

That only 
Death will squelch
But maybe

I will 
Love you 

More


 

Contest: A Diminished Hexaverse
Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger
Date: January 16, 2021

1Your brown eyes compel 5
2Bring out this desire 5
3Wishing to hide in 5
4Your lapel, maybe 5
5Upon a high wire 5
6 0
7You touch the bell 4
8Sparks will fly high 4
9From your soft hand 4
10Igniting flames 4
11That only 3
12Death will squelch 3
13But maybe 3
14I will 2
15Love you 2
16More 1

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Quoth Theraven January 17, 2021 at 1:17 PM Sara, Ah I hear a singing sigh in this one, 'Our Love'. The sigh is mine. Well done. -Richard Sara Kendrick January 17, 2021 at 1:40 PM Quoth, I am glad that you sighed. Your presence is encouraging . Sara

Mystic Rose Rose January 17, 2021 at 8:49 AM Splendidly done dear poet friend, gl in teh contest Sara Kendrick January 17, 2021 at 1:31 PM Mystic, Your uplifting review of my work is appreciated.. Thanks for the visit. Sara

Victor Buhagiar January 16, 2021 at 12:06 PM A lovely romantic poem. You did well ~~ Sara Kendrick January 16, 2021 at 12:49 PM Victor, Your comments are validating. Sara