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Our Love

OUR LOVE

   We saw each other, heartbeats to quiver.
  Two eyes met, not a big deal what was harm?
   Both hearts bubbled with fervent fervor.
   Asleep emotive urge in wobbling charm.
                     
   Vortex of passion whirled two minds to sink
   We loved each other, ears- eyes were eager
   to listen to souls with amorous blink
   Frolic, delightful, vibrant in vigor.

  True love like dazzling Sun on steady glow         
  Perfect love offers shelter calm quiet         
  Entwined in joy and grief on pearly flow.
   Blood in flood romantic and passionate.
  
   Love emits rays cascading confidence   
   Unison on mutual dependence.


   11/25/19

 'I want to fall in love with a Sonnet' Contest by Melani Udaeta
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 25, 2019 at 2:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, Anisha ... good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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