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Our Love

You smiled, I also did. I winked at you, you smiled again. I saw a star upon me, Shining bright like a Diamond. I fell for you, and you also did, I told you and you listened. I asked you and you denied, I turned my back and you smiled again. I felt like I am stupid, While you saw me like a hero. I saw you like an angel, While you thought I am an angel. You were nothing to them, But you were something to me. You became something to them, While you’re everything to me. I loved you and you also did, So we loved each other, While they crushed on each other. Amazing!

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Date: 8/29/2018 3:30:00 AM
This explains falling in love so well,Sithembele. Well done!
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Date: 8/24/2018 12:15:00 PM
your poem is amazing Sithembele - straight from the heart ! I love the love in it. xoxo Jenny P.
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Sithembele Mlenzana
Date: 8/27/2018 6:54:00 PM
Thanks for your comment, it gives me confidence

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