Our Love

You smiled, I also did.
I winked at you, you smiled again.
I saw a star upon me,
Shining bright like a Diamond.

I fell for you, and you also did,
I told you and you listened.
I asked you and you denied,
I turned my back and you smiled again.

I felt like I am stupid,
While you saw me like a hero.
I saw you like an angel,
While you thought I am an angel.

You were nothing to them,
But you were something to me.
You became something to them,
While you’re everything to me.

I loved you and you also did,
So we loved each other,
While they crushed on each other.
Amazing!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
February 18, 2025 at 6:47 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
Krutsinger Avatar
August 29, 2018 at 3:30 AM
This explains falling in love so well,Sithembele. Well done!
Proxenos Avatar
August 24, 2018 at 12:15 PM
your poem is amazing Sithembele - straight from the heart ! I love the love in it. xoxo Jenny P.
Mlenzana Avatar
August 27, 2018 at 6:54 PM
Thanks for your comment, it gives me confidence
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