Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Our Long Lost Love

Out of the blue
I think of you
Who is to blame?
For loss of flame

Our love has gone
To a dark dawn
I feel the pain
Tears down the drain

For in the past
Our love was vast
Now death is near
Stop sign to fear

I see my gloom
I feel the doom 
We shut the door
Live in the core

Love is now hard
We build the barred
The sad is deep
For now, we weep

We take the pills
To stop the ills
No love for hire
No more the fire

Blind eyes that speak
Mad mind so bleak
Take back the strain
Ease off the brain

Come back to me
That I may plea
Your love be mine
To this, we dine.




4 words per line all 1 syllable each.  So 4 syllables per line.
32 line poem, so in total 128 words.
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Jan.30.2018
128 words 
Sponsored by: Silent One 

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Gregory Richard Barden February 15, 2018 at 10:43 PM Sincere congratulations on your win in this VERY challenging form, W2 - blessings and congrats to you, my friend! :-)

Maria Williams February 12, 2018 at 2:10 AM What incredible words of pain from your golden quill. Got to borrow it sometime.Congrats on your win, of course it had to do well...Maria

Susan Ashley February 6, 2018 at 8:41 PM A wonderfully expressive sad poem of loss Winged Warrior. Beautifully written with great rhythm and rhymes - but I wouldn't expect anything less of course :)) Congratulations on your excellent win. I love the classic 'Not In Love' - lovely nostalgia from my mid teens - thanks for bringing sweet memories... :)) ~Susan

John Gondolf February 6, 2018 at 4:55 AM Nicely written, WW, congrats on your win. John

Eve Roper February 5, 2018 at 8:55 PM Congratulations on your win, ^WW^! Great rhymes and flow in your poem. Hugs Eve ~`*

John Hamilton February 5, 2018 at 10:37 AM Just checked the song, I'm not in love 10CC such a classic from 76 I think, great memories thanks for posting this gem! Wonder why they never did more music?

John Hamilton February 5, 2018 at 10:32 AM Great write as per usual WW, congrats on another solid win!

Sandra Haight February 4, 2018 at 7:21 PM Wonderful rhymes and flow in your sad poem, WW. Congratulations on your win. Sandra

Line Gauthier February 4, 2018 at 6:14 PM Loved your poem - a pleasure to read. Thanks for the attached song, it was a extra treat. Congrats on your winning poem.

Silent One February 4, 2018 at 3:44 PM You write loss very well WW.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Agnes Krampe January 30, 2018 at 5:36 PM I love what you did with the prompt, ^WW^. This is very nice. I found it very difficult to write "seriously" in this form and could only come up with something humorous and not nearly as profound. This reads like a winner.

Nette Onclaud January 30, 2018 at 12:57 PM sad and beautifully written, WW...great penning from your indelible pen... huggs

Arturo Michael January 30, 2018 at 10:01 AM A lot of emotions here...Nicely expressed...All the best WW

Vijay Pandit January 30, 2018 at 9:34 AM A fast moving, rhyme..skillfully rendered, despite the syllable restriction..well done, WW..I see a winning poem.