Our Lives

A house to live in and a room of my own.
                          A family to love and a place to call home.

                         There is no one here that shows they care.
                        Having a life with nothing or no one to share.

                 Every night we would bough our heads and say a prayer.
                      That our life would change and things would be fair.

                  When I cry the burdens I carry hurt me through my soul.
                 My faith and hope is to have a life that makes me fill whole.

                When I lay my head to sleep the pain I feel doesn't go away.
                 Before I sleep to our Lord I say please change my life I pray.

                 My life consist of a mom and brothers,sisters and never a dad.
                   The life she gave us was all we needed and was all she had.

                          So my life wasn't the best but it was filled with love.
                                But as we all grew-up our lives fit like a glove.
                                                                                               Teresa Skyles
Entered in Brian Strand's"Any 2011 posted poem 14 lines max"contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/29/2011 5:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Teresa. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/20/2011 8:46:00 PM
sweet as can be, Teresa. HOw did I ever miss this one. A belated congrats on this one in Brian's contest.
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Date: 6/12/2011 6:22:00 AM
Warm from the heart write Teresa... Best of luck in the contest.....thanks for your sweet comments on "My Daddy"... it came from the heart....luv Michael
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:25:00 AM
Your Mom must have been a wonderful woman, and so proud of her children! LOvely dedication!
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Date: 6/11/2011 7:45:00 AM
congrats on your win with this great piece. cory
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:50:00 PM
Sweet Teresa, your life hasn't been easy but you have wonderful values -- you know what's really important in this world. Family, love and just some simple comforts to make life easier. Bless you for sharing this and I wish you success in Brian's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2011 2:28:00 PM
such a lovely splendid piece Teresa on family and one missing component so meaningful.. u ended the poem so beautifully my friend.. all family members interlock in luv.. God's great gift to us all.. enjoy a happy weekend..
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