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Our Little Haven

When I was just a little girl
With mind as always, in a whirl
Me and my cousin, we would roam
Far, far away from my sweet home

We'd make our way to some rocks we knew
All covered by green moss, we two
Oh it was such a magic place
And left huge smiles upon my face

To us it was a fairyland
With imagination vast and grand
We both saw fairies, little elves too
Dancing daintily as they do

When that time came, we had to leave
Both our little hearts would grieve
We'd leave that haven, her and me
Our minds brim filled with memories

So we went back to normalcy
And though it made us both unhappy
We knew that soon we'd go back there
And see those we folk everywhere

Copyright © Vera Duggan | Year Posted 2014

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Liam Mcdaid Date: 10/3/2014 7:32:00 AM very beautifully drawn vera full of beauty god bless Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 10/5/2014 7:42:00 PM Thank you so much Liam, just another little event in my life, take care my friend................Vera...............

Lisa Duggan Date: 8/21/2014 5:23:00 AM I can picture the place in my head beautiful x x x Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 8/27/2014 12:33:00 AM I think I have told you this story before my dear, you would have loved that little place when you were little...........Luv.........Mum.xx

Peter Dome Date: 7/14/2014 8:50:00 PM Shhh. I see fairy's too. A lovely write Vera, really enjoyed it. Such sweet memories. We should never grow up. thank you for sharing. well done. best wishes. Pete. Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 8/12/2014 1:43:00 AM Thank you so much Peter, when I wrote that a lot of wonderful memories came flooding back, it was a lovely time in my life, take care my friend................Vera...............

Cherl Dunn Date: 7/5/2014 12:07:00 AM Hi again dear lady this brings back memories of my childhood, we had a boating yacht club near us, and a place we called the island. It was a wild preserve area. So my three friends and I would go their and pretend also just like you and your childhood friend. I love your imagery you and Peter have this in common at least in this write, the memory of enchantment is wonderful here in your work. Nicely done again lady, I love the magic in this thank you for sharing such a special memory cheri Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 7/8/2014 8:59:00 PM Oh Cherl, wasn't it wonderful when we were young, you sound so much like me in many ways, it's funny you know, yesterday when I was out I met up with my cousin and we reminised about this, take care my dear friend........Vera.......

Robert Lindley Date: 6/24/2014 9:42:00 AM Visiting this write again. Will now add it to my fav to make it easier to connect to read. It truly inspires me my friend and for that thank you!!!!!! Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 6/28/2014 1:15:00 AM Robert you are such a good friend, taking the time to read my poem twice and being a friend to Peter, love to Riza and take care all three of you.......Vera..............

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/24/2014 7:05:00 AM - A really nice poem to read Vera .... reminded me of my own childhood - Have a nice day dear Vera - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 6/28/2014 1:13:00 AM So glad you had a similar childhood Anne those were the days, so happy and carefree. Thank you so much taking the time to read, take care...............Vera.............

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 6/22/2014 8:55:00 PM You have written a beautiful rhyme, such a touching story. Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 6/22/2014 10:54:00 PM Thank you so much Scott, yes it was quite a joy writing it and remembering it, I had to think back sixty odd years and that was quite hard but I remembered most of it. Take care...................Vera.............

Robert Lindley Date: 6/12/2014 11:19:00 PM A tale of a wonderland!!! Love it... We had one as well only, it was filed with monsters and dark evil warlords for us boys to slay. Just over the big hills in the deep woods behind our farmhouse.. BBBravo my friend, a fine magical write !!! Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 6/13/2014 7:51:00 PM Thank you so much Robert, it was a great childhood game so magical, my brothers were like you, they were cowboys and Indians, used to make their own rifles out of wood and use the dog for buffalo's Regards to your wife..................Vera..............

Casarah Nance Date: 6/6/2014 3:24:00 PM Oh how great! what a fun place to discover. Never forget the enchantment in which little eyes see, we can find a world of fantasy, even though we are grown up, through our poems and our childlike hearts, lovely poem Vera I am so glad to read your words :) Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 6/6/2014 8:32:00 PM Thank you so much Casarah, yes looking through a little girls eyes these are wonderous places, this is a true story, anther time in my life, I think I was about 6 or 7 years old and what an imagination we have when we were children, love your pic. of you and your daughter, she is lovely, Take care my friend...........Vera...........

Ilene Bauer Date: 6/6/2014 3:22:00 PM a charming little tale, vera! i enjoyed... Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 6/6/2014 8:34:00 PM Thank you for taking the time to read my little poem Ilene, just another little phase in my life, wonderful times when we were children I am sure you have had the same experiences, Take care..............Vera.............

Vincent Flannery Date: 6/6/2014 2:32:00 PM Such an enchanting story and wonderful memory to have Vera. Peter was right you are a great writer and though your husband is my favorite on this site, he now has competition. Really enjoyed your words. Best Wishes! Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 6/6/2014 8:38:00 PM Vincent thank you ever so much, I will never be as good as Peter but he has been at it for as long as I can remember, you would not believe how many he has written, in fact we have a chest of draws filled with them, what will happen to them when we have departed this earth I will never know, anyway thanks for the lovely comment........Take care............Vera..........

Tim Smith Date: 6/6/2014 8:53:00 AM What a fantastic place where your imagination could run wild... Hugs Tim Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 6/6/2014 8:43:00 PM Tim you are so generous with your comments which I thank you so much for, yes you have a great imagination when you are a child and I had a great one like everything else it is a great thing to remember, it is strange how certain things stick out in your mind, and that is one memory that does........Take care my friend.............Vera...........

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 6/6/2014 5:40:00 AM This is good Vera, we all have those memories that we treasure. Thanks for sharing..... Lucilla Login to Reply Vera Duggan Date: 6/6/2014 8:47:00 PM Ah Lucilla my friend, thank you so much my dear for reading this little poem which bought back memories to me, I was only about 6 or 7 years old and it was a wonderful time in my life, our childhood years are so precious, so it is great to remember them, I had a great childhood so I was very lucky. Take care my friend, hope you are well.......................Vera.............