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13-Mar-2016
Contest: In one line (monoku #9) write what you SEE or FEEL
Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A
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Callus Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 3:22 PM
They share life's experiences together! A good take on this proposed visual, Sathya. Congratulations on a fine win! ~ Regards // paul
Selfa Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:06 AM
Congratulations Sathya on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS
A. Sharma Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:35 AM
Brilliant take Sathya.. congrats on big win!
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:48 PM
very nice, and congrats to you
Raven Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:25 PM
Hi Sathya, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent write. Enjoyed your Monoku. Into my faves it does go....Vlad.
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March 27, 2016 at 12:04 AM
Sathya, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA
La France Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Sathya, very nice monoku, best of luck in the contest, 7 ~
Babu Avatar
March 19, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Thanks a Lot B.W.......:-)
Babu Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 4:10 AM
Thanks a lot B.W.......:-)
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