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In 2023 we celebrate 50 years of marriage!


 

Enter the winter of our life as one
The months and years have rushed on by
Together we’ve endured what life has dealt
Our true love’s the reason why

We both were sweet 16 when introduced
We waved hello across the room
Was one year later till we met again
Wasn’t long before love bloomed

       When reminiscing through our life
        there’s so much that we hold dear
         Regret is not a word that we would use
          despite all the tears ...

Our vows were said when we were just 18
We pledged a love to last the years
Such declaration gave us confidence
Helped mitigate our fears

Our firstborn son came after nineteen months
Our second son just eighteen more
Now in their forties with wives of their own
Ladies whom we so adore

       When reminiscing through our life
        there’s so much that we hold dear
         Regret is not a word that we would use
          despite all the tears …

And so we live to love another day
You smile at me and take my hand
Assured that as we face life’s obstacles
together we will stand

Just for a moment, I go back in time
Freshness of youth as memories soar
If I were asked to do it all again
I would wish to love you more …

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 4/3/2025 5:11:00 PM
Wonderful Mark, come December this year me and mine will have been married for fifty seven years, we met when I was just sixteen and I was twenty when we tied the knot…. Beryl
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Mark Toney
Date: 4/3/2025 6:57:00 PM
That’s wonderful, Beryl. What a blessing! Ours will be fifty two years in July. My how time flies!
Date: 4/12/2022 11:51:00 PM
WOW! Mark a lovely recap of your love for Carol. How many people can say they, "would wish to love you more" I guess just some of us can just wish. Peter and I have been married 56 years this past Feb. unbelievable... Love you guys
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Date: 4/14/2022 8:16:00 PM
Carol and I will be celebrating 49 years in a few months. We appreciate the vibrant comment, Barbara!
Date: 2/23/2022 4:48:00 PM
This is a beautifully written romantic poem. Thoroughly enjoyed reading. Take care!
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Date: 2/23/2022 5:14:00 PM
Valerie, thank you for the encouraging comment.
Date: 1/20/2022 11:25:00 AM
Wow, Mark! Take pride in all your wonderful and tender memories.. recall your youth and relish in what you did and adore.. reminisce about the past, the seeds of beauty and Love you sowed yields a fulfilling life.. You composed a hit so many would relate to! I so much enjoyed reading your amazing poetry.. My deepest regards and blessings.
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Date: 1/21/2022 2:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Besma. Your gracious words and encouragement made my day!
Date: 1/4/2022 10:21:00 AM
Very powerful Mark, stunningly good, actually...
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Date: 1/4/2022 8:18:00 PM
Thank you for the encouraging comment, James. You've made my day :)
Date: 12/30/2021 10:59:00 PM
If I were asked to do again, I would wish you to love again. Amazing
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Date: 12/31/2021 2:32:00 PM
I am grateful for your encouraging comment, Arjun.
Date: 12/26/2021 9:59:00 PM
I truly love this, Mark. For two reasons, one it is an excellent poem, and the other it seems to emulate my wife an i's journey into winter. Favourite for me. Happy New Year to your family...Harry
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Date: 12/29/2021 5:05:00 PM
Thank you, Harry, for your lovely comment and well-wishes. I also appreciate the “Fav”. You made my day!
Date: 12/24/2021 12:30:00 PM
Wow Mark this is great, nothing like true love, sounds like something I would write! Well done!
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Mark Toney
Date: 12/25/2021 8:26:00 AM
Why thank you, John!

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