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Unseeking Seeker Our Last Thought Poetry Contest 28 April 2021 One last final thought before i depart God help me I never in life believed in you But please forgive me Let me in And please look after me For i did not know what i did And promise i will abode in future Have learned my lesson And will leave and forego all of my selfish ways if you are willing to let me Whilst simultaneously firmly pressed fingers crossed behind me just incase To hedge my bets You are not willing to accept me And i am left stuck in purgatory With the lift in need of repair and out of order and the stairwell is firmly locked shut chained up So i can't go up or go down either way And that's my final thought

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Date: 4/29/2021 3:35:00 PM
Nice write with nice humor Christopher, But you ask a valid question, is it ever too late to be forgiven, albeit with your fingers crossed, is telling me your probably winging it, cheers David good luck in the contest,
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 4/29/2021 4:45:00 PM
Cheers David Winging it indeed

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