Amy Green Poet Tanka

Our Last Embrace

Finale; the end
He would take you forever-
If I only knew.
Eternal; our last embrace-
'Til my breath ebbs, too.

Won Honorable Mention in "A Warm Embrace " contest by John Heck

A. Green

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Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2010 at 8:17 PM hey, don't think i saw this one before. Congratulations for your HM,Amy! LUv, Andrea

Debbie Guzzi June 18, 2010 at 4:34 AM really thought provoking we don't know if he dies in your arms...or if he is God? or if you wait to go to his arms when you die? So much in this! Light & Love

Wilma Neels June 17, 2010 at 6:17 AM Congrats on you HM win with this one Amy ;) rgds WN

Carol Sunshine Brown June 16, 2010 at 9:02 AM Congratulations on your win in John Heck's contest "A Warm Embrace" Amy. Love, Carol

Jessica Bowie June 16, 2010 at 12:23 AM nice one.

Roger Page June 14, 2010 at 12:53 PM Nice. Roger

Dr.Ram Mehta June 12, 2010 at 6:18 PM Congrats on HM win, Amy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 12, 2010 at 4:43 PM Congrats Awesome Amy on your HM in the Warm Embrace contest... an awesome write from an awesome poetess.. enjoy your special honor... with luv.. from the "Sweetheart"

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2010 at 11:17 PM VEry nice one. Romantic!

Dr.Ram Mehta June 8, 2010 at 8:33 AM Wish you good luck in the contest. Nice expressions