Our Lady

the sun dances 
and keeps changing colour - -
our lady smiles

Our Lady of Fatima for Debbie's Visions of Mary contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 9:16 PM
Very philosophical and practical write. Congrats on the fine win, jack
Johnson Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Everyday's to be appreciated. You've expressed that beautifully Jack. Good luck in the contest. Peace. :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 8:45 AM
Lovely piece
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2014 at 8:23 AM
wow, GREAT job with this one. I have not even yet read this contest description!!
Kendrick Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Reads like a winner to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
Callus Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 11:22 AM
beautiful. all the best for contest. // paul
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