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'our Journey As Us'

music help set the milieu
shared with family and friends
your hand entangled with mine
our journey began

By : Wilma N. Neels


Contest: Wedding Rehearsal - Dodoitsu
9th Place

Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2011

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Jack Horne Date: 5/18/2011 7:52:00 AM Many congrats on your win, Wilma : ) Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/18/2011 7:42:00 AM sooo lovely and sweet.. my best cheers to you, wilms! :) huggs Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 5/18/2011 6:26:00 AM A beautiful journey Wilma. Many congrats luv. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/17/2011 10:34:00 PM Sweet as can be, Wilma. Congratulations! Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 5/17/2011 5:33:00 PM Hey Wilma, Great entry. Congratulations on your poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/17/2011 2:06:00 PM Such a beautiful image, Wilma. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/17/2011 1:15:00 PM Congrats Wilma on your amazing win in the Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem my friend.. enjoy another treasured win with luv .. and for excellence ... Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/17/2011 12:47:00 PM Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Wilma. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/17/2011 12:00:00 PM Congratulations on the ninth place win in my contest, Wilma Login to Reply

Sidney Hall Mad Poet Date: 4/24/2011 9:17:00 PM Hey Girl friend, I'm your man not Chris. check out my comment on his poem. I love you and your poem Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 4/24/2011 8:04:00 AM I feel the closeness within this write wilma, feel it overcoming temporal boundry's (well felt.) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/23/2011 11:46:00 PM SWEET as can be, Wilma. I may not make the deadline on this one. Everyone is coming up with good stuff and here i still sit not knowing an approach.ahha. Happy Easter my south African friend, LUv, Andrea Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/23/2011 9:15:00 PM Hello, Wilma! yes let the journey began.. ..had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d. Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/23/2011 7:01:00 PM a great piece Wilma really enjoyed, well written. thank you for commenting on Quite Little Child. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 4/22/2011 3:29:00 PM Happy Easter Wilma my dear, crazy week at work and just getting back on soup today.. Promise to catch up and get back to our email Colab... with love always Michael Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 4/22/2011 2:56:00 PM nice use of the form. Happy Easter!Light & Love Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/22/2011 2:07:00 PM Hope this is based on a recent experience, Wilma. Music adds much to family gatherings as well as romance. Keeping pushing forward in that journey and have a blessed Easter! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 4/22/2011 12:32:00 PM I just love, as I'm sure you know of me, 'terse writes' dear poet...and this write was very fine ! I enjoyed reading this deep thought Wilma, and a write from you today ! Have a blessed weekend my friend....much love, james Login to Reply

Stephen Parker Date: 4/22/2011 12:00:00 PM A swan song for a long, meaningful journey! A nice, dedicatory oration! Enjoyed your verse! Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 4/22/2011 11:40:00 AM Another mini Gem from you wilma.Best wishes---kash Login to Reply