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'our Journey As Us'

music help set the milieu
shared with family and friends
your hand entangled with mine
our journey began

By : Wilma N. Neels


Contest: Wedding Rehearsal - Dodoitsu
9th Place

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Jack Horne

May 18, 2011 at 7:52 AM

Many congrats on your win, Wilma : )

Nette Onclaud

May 18, 2011 at 7:42 AM

sooo lovely and sweet.. my best cheers to you, wilms! :) huggs

Tahera Mannan

May 18, 2011 at 6:26 AM

A beautiful journey Wilma. Many congrats luv.

Andrea Dietrich

May 17, 2011 at 10:34 PM

Sweet as can be, Wilma. Congratulations!

John Freeman

May 17, 2011 at 5:33 PM

Hey Wilma, Great entry. Congratulations on your poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

May 17, 2011 at 2:06 PM

Such a beautiful image, Wilma. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 17, 2011 at 1:15 PM

Congrats Wilma on your amazing win in the Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem my friend.. enjoy another treasured win with luv .. and for excellence ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 17, 2011 at 12:47 PM

Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

May 17, 2011 at 12:00 PM

Congratulations on the ninth place win in my contest, Wilma

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

April 24, 2011 at 9:17 PM

Hey Girl friend, I'm your man not Chris. check out my comment on his poem. I love you and your poem

Joe Maverick

April 24, 2011 at 8:04 AM

I feel the closeness within this write wilma, feel it overcoming temporal boundry's (well felt.)

Andrea Dietrich

April 23, 2011 at 11:46 PM

SWEET as can be, Wilma. I may not make the deadline on this one. Everyone is coming up with good stuff and here i still sit not knowing an approach.ahha. Happy Easter my south African friend, LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

April 23, 2011 at 9:15 PM

Hello, Wilma! yes let the journey began.. ..had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.

James Foulk

April 23, 2011 at 7:01 PM

a great piece Wilma really enjoyed, well written. thank you for commenting on Quite Little Child.

Michael J. Falotico

April 22, 2011 at 3:29 PM

Happy Easter Wilma my dear, crazy week at work and just getting back on soup today.. Promise to catch up and get back to our email Colab... with love always Michael

Debbie Guzzi

April 22, 2011 at 2:56 PM

nice use of the form. Happy Easter!Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

April 22, 2011 at 2:07 PM

Hope this is based on a recent experience, Wilma. Music adds much to family gatherings as well as romance. Keeping pushing forward in that journey and have a blessed Easter! Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

April 22, 2011 at 12:32 PM

I just love, as I'm sure you know of me, 'terse writes' dear poet...and this write was very fine ! I enjoyed reading this deep thought Wilma, and a write from you today ! Have a blessed weekend my friend....much love, james