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'our Journey As Us'

music help set the milieu shared with family and friends your hand entangled with mine our journey began By : Wilma N. Neels Contest: Wedding Rehearsal - Dodoitsu 9th Place

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Jack Horne

Date: 5/18/2011 7:52:00 AM

Many congrats on your win, Wilma : )

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/18/2011 7:42:00 AM

sooo lovely and sweet.. my best cheers to you, wilms! :) huggs

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/18/2011 6:26:00 AM

A beautiful journey Wilma. Many congrats luv.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/17/2011 10:34:00 PM

Sweet as can be, Wilma. Congratulations!

John Freeman

Date: 5/17/2011 5:33:00 PM

Hey Wilma, Great entry. Congratulations on your poem's honor in the winning circle. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/17/2011 2:06:00 PM

Such a beautiful image, Wilma. Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest. Way to go! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/17/2011 1:15:00 PM

Congrats Wilma on your amazing win in the Wedding Rehearsal contest with this dynamic poem my friend.. enjoy another treasured win with luv .. and for excellence ...

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/17/2011 12:47:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in Dr. Ram's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2011 12:00:00 PM

Congratulations on the ninth place win in my contest, Wilma

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 4/24/2011 9:17:00 PM

Hey Girl friend, I'm your man not Chris. check out my comment on his poem. I love you and your poem

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/24/2011 8:04:00 AM

I feel the closeness within this write wilma, feel it overcoming temporal boundry's (well felt.)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/23/2011 11:46:00 PM

SWEET as can be, Wilma. I may not make the deadline on this one. Everyone is coming up with good stuff and here i still sit not knowing an approach.ahha. Happy Easter my south African friend, LUv, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/23/2011 9:15:00 PM

Hello, Wilma! yes let the journey began.. ..had fun reading your poem, take care and have your self a happy and safe Easter! always p.d.

James Foulk

Date: 4/23/2011 7:01:00 PM

a great piece Wilma really enjoyed, well written. thank you for commenting on Quite Little Child.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/22/2011 3:29:00 PM

Happy Easter Wilma my dear, crazy week at work and just getting back on soup today.. Promise to catch up and get back to our email Colab... with love always Michael

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 4/22/2011 2:56:00 PM

nice use of the form. Happy Easter!Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2011 2:07:00 PM

Hope this is based on a recent experience, Wilma. Music adds much to family gatherings as well as romance. Keeping pushing forward in that journey and have a blessed Easter! Love, Carolyn

James Peranteau

Date: 4/22/2011 12:32:00 PM

I just love, as I'm sure you know of me, 'terse writes' dear poet...and this write was very fine ! I enjoyed reading this deep thought Wilma, and a write from you today ! Have a blessed weekend my friend....much love, james

Stephen Parker

Date: 4/22/2011 12:00:00 PM

A swan song for a long, meaningful journey! A nice, dedicatory oration! Enjoyed your verse!

Kash Poet

Date: 4/22/2011 11:40:00 AM

Another mini Gem from you wilma.Best wishes---kash