Elizabeth O'Driscoll Poet Rhyme

Our Journey

We have been on a beautiful journey
One I shall never ever forget
The best journey yet

You were with me all the way
each moment of each day
In my heart you will forever stay

We travelled many roads
Through so many emotions
But love shone through for me and you

God put your hand in mine
In universal love to shine
Through space and time


And though I never understood
I always knew I should
Never give up on love

So here we are today
Back home to stay
With one very important thing to say

I love you all

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire November 29, 2012 at 12:30 PM Dear Elizabeth, Welcome to POETRYSOUP Congratulations on YOUR featured POEM Where YOU on this site before? Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments LOVE ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal Liege...Harry Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 29, 2012 at 3:13 PM Thank you HG, love Elizabeth

John Posey November 19, 2012 at 12:07 PM Your words kindle warmth in my heart and soul. Your artistic pen never seems to fail you. thanks for all your encouragement. Keep the coffee warm... I will visit often....... Jake Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 20, 2012 at 6:08 AM :) the coffee is on, see you soon, thank you for your lovely comments, love Elizabeth

Carol Sunshine Brown November 6, 2012 at 5:54 AM Congrats on your excellent poetry being featured Elizabeth. Love, Carol Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 6, 2012 at 11:45 AM Thank you Carol, have a wonderful evening, love elizabeth

Lucilla Carrillo November 2, 2012 at 8:58 PM This is beautiful and very well written. Thanks for sharing it with us. Also thank you for reading The Night Of The Grizzly. Many blessings. Lucilla Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 3, 2012 at 5:31 AM Thank you Lucilla, love elizabeth

Poet Destroyer A November 2, 2012 at 12:21 PM I love the flow, and grasp of this poem. Elizabeth, your pen is wonderful ,, and love,,,, wow... them words are the best every day... xox~pd Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 2, 2012 at 3:49 PM Thank you pd, love elizabeth

David Scott November 2, 2012 at 9:29 AM NICE WRITE AGAIN MATE DID YOU GERT MY SOUP MAIL THANKS FOR COMMENTS ON MINE XX DAVIDSCOTT Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 2, 2012 at 3:48 PM Thank you David, I got no soup mail from you

Justin Debrosse November 1, 2012 at 7:49 AM Wonderful tone and simple words brought from true experience! Thanks for reading my poem too, i appreciate it. Justin Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 1, 2012 at 6:57 PM Thank you Justin, love Elizabeth

Rachel St.Cross November 1, 2012 at 7:41 AM ‡ I Love This Beautiful Poems Title, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth. 'Our Journey.' Many These Winding Roads And Yet Beautiful Love Has Not Foresaken, Rather, Has Paved Beauty's Way. Sweet Your Visit. My Love, Forever, Rachel * Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 1, 2012 at 6:56 PM Yes this is very true, thank you Rachel, love as ever Elizabeth

Laura Breidenthal October 31, 2012 at 7:23 PM Awesome verse! Thanks for stopping by, and keep up the inspiring work! :) Always, Laura Elizabeth O'Driscoll November 1, 2012 at 6:52 AM Thank you Laura, love elizabeth

Daver Austin October 31, 2012 at 1:02 PM Hey! You got an attitude! - a real fine, loving attitude. More love, daver Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 31, 2012 at 2:19 PM Thank you Daver, love Elizabeth

Holly Moore October 31, 2012 at 5:29 AM Don't forget to change the form from "I don't know" to Rhyme..Holly

Holly Moore October 31, 2012 at 5:28 AM Very beautiful..really keeps the reader's attention...thanks for your comments. Keep writing! xxoo Holly Moore Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 31, 2012 at 7:35 AM Thank you Holly, love elizabeth

Phyllis Babcock October 30, 2012 at 2:08 PM And a wonderful journey thru life with plenty of love. A nice uplifting poem you have penned. love phyl Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 31, 2012 at 1:04 AM Thank you Phyllis, love elizabeth

Dan Kearley October 30, 2012 at 8:34 AM Thats love :o) Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 30, 2012 at 12:13 PM Sure is : ) love elizabeth

Don Johnson October 29, 2012 at 5:16 AM when the world is sweet today , an happiness comes out to play, perhaps i'll find me some:) great poetry, yes hon' ... Don of the j... Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 30, 2012 at 4:29 AM Thank you Don, love elizabeth

Rachel St.Cross October 28, 2012 at 6:49 PM ‡ Thank You, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth. A Wonderful Joy, Your Beauty's Priceless Visit. Sweet Dreams. My love, Rachel * Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 29, 2012 at 4:31 AM Thank you Rachel, sorry I missed your beautiful message last night, hope you had a peacefull night with sweet dreams also, love as ever Elizabeth

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs October 28, 2012 at 5:55 PM Very nice poem, so sweet:) Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 29, 2012 at 4:28 AM Thank you Gwen, love Elizabeth

Rachel St.Cross October 28, 2012 at 5:44 PM ‡ I Always Loved Your Beauty, Beautiful Elizabeth. I Saw Your Name Once More Within Neon Lights. Wished To Pass Back By To Say Hello And, Hope You Have A Beautiful Night. Sweet Dreams. My Love, Rachel * Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 29, 2012 at 4:27 AM Thank you Rachel for your beautiful message, it is always wonderful to see your beautiful words, yes I had peacefull nights sleep thank you, and hope you have a beautiful day, love Elizabeth

Rachel St.Cross October 27, 2012 at 6:23 PM * Melts The Heart Within Such Heart Spoken Beauty, Sweet Beautiful Elizabeth. Heart's And More Heart's And Love Is The Greatest Beauty Of They All. A Sweet Smelling Aroma. My Love, Rachel * Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 28, 2012 at 4:00 PM Thank you Rachel, your beautiful words always put a smile on my face, love to you too as always. love elizabeth

Michael J. Falotico October 27, 2012 at 9:16 AM Wonderful piece my dear Poet friend... hugs n luv Michael Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 27, 2012 at 5:23 PM Thank you Michael, love and hugs to you too.

Debbie Guzzi October 27, 2012 at 8:00 AM Keep writing keep creating! Light & Love Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 27, 2012 at 8:11 AM Thank you Debbie, I will,I don't have as much time on my hands at the moment, but when i do get a chance I will, love elizabeth

Robert Pettit October 26, 2012 at 10:49 PM Nice write. Everybody on this site welcomes you. We are glad to have you with us. Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 27, 2012 at 8:06 AM Thank you Robert, lovely to be back with you all, love elizabeth

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 26, 2012 at 9:04 PM SO ENJOYED READING YOUR MOST CREATIVE WRITE TONITE ELIZABETH .. FANTASTIC WORK ..THANKXX FOR SWEET COMMENT ON MY HALLOWEEN POEM LUV .. Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 27, 2012 at 8:03 AM Thank you Linda, love elizabeth Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 27, 2012 at 8:01 AM thank you Anne Lise, hope you have a wonderful weekend also, love elizabeth xox

Anne-Lise Andresen October 26, 2012 at 12:34 PM Hope you will enjoy reading and writing poetry with us. :) Really good poem and beautifully written. - Thank you. Have a enjoyable weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 27, 2012 at 8:05 AM sorry put your reply on Lindas by mistake, Thank you Anne Lise, hope you have wonderful weekend also, love elizabeth xox

Harry Horsman October 26, 2012 at 9:54 AM Welcome back Elizabeth, this is so beautiful... love this............ Elizabeth O'Driscoll October 26, 2012 at 11:32 AM Thank you Harry, hope you are keeping well, love Elizabeth

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