Our Island

I miss your touch, your laughter.
We once had our own island.
Just you and me. 

No, one knew that we were lost
together in a love that melted
candles.

It was so good for awhile anyway.
With you I felt like a princess.
You said 'I Love You' forever.

Then the plague entered our island,
with its poison contaminating all.
Why did you allow it to happen?

My heart acking, racing, broken.
You, ripped my soul apart with,
the hands that once held me.

You say It will not happen again,
but the tongue inside you lies.
You are missed no longer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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March 10, 2013 at 11:12 AM
Good morning,AUTHOR ;-) Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Have yourself a nice and sweet Sunday. ~Always & Forever *LINDA
Khemlani Avatar
March 5, 2013 at 1:56 AM
Wow! Loved it. It surely leaves a goose bump effect. Love is an seductive and can become a poison too. Regards, Bhavna
Shango Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 8:32 AM
Absolute separation must the first act of intervention when the plague begins, great write.
Fuller Avatar
April 21, 2009 at 10:30 AM
Love. What do they say, it's a 4 letter word! beautiful poem and goes right to the heart of the matter! Keep up the great work, it's part of the healing process.
Richards Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 6:50 AM
Oh, such bitter pain....a heart breaking poem....well done! ~ love, Carrie
Jordan Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 6:23 AM
Rhonda that is so sad - Sometimes in life it seems those we love the most cut us the deepest - Stay Strong inside hon because that truly is the one aspect in life we can control - Our inner strength - God Bless, MJ
Townsend Avatar
April 20, 2009 at 5:58 AM
A sad write... The emotions and pain expressed here are so real and vividly clear in your words. Well done. Smiles for a better day from Lolita
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