Notes About The Poem

Our Home of Rest



In mausoleum, home of rest-
   the afterlife on earth, 
our souls will watch from heaven's nest-
   the remnants from our birth.

August 06, 2020

Premiere Contest: Rithimus Divisa 4
Sponsor: Gregory R Bardin

Four Lines From My Poem- "Together, Bring Us"
Posted August 22, 2016
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Ermine Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 4:32 PM
Sandra, I think your afterlife glance would have taken degrees of care to construct so well. Meter here should go into a poetry instruction book. Huge Congrats! Gregory no doubt had 35 excellent entries, how did he sift out this list so quickly!?
Logan Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Congratulations on making the winner's list, Sandra.
Hamilton Avatar
August 28, 2020 at 5:18 PM
So sad Sandra congrats on being on the short winners list!
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