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In mausoleum, home of rest- the afterlife on earth, our souls will watch from heaven's nest- the remnants from our birth. August 06, 2020 Premiere Contest: Rithimus Divisa 4 Sponsor: Gregory R Bardin Four Lines From My Poem- "Together, Bring Us" Posted August 22, 2016

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Sigrid Ermine

Date: 8/29/2020 4:32:00 PM

Sandra, I think your afterlife glance would have taken degrees of care to construct so well. Meter here should go into a poetry instruction book. Huge Congrats! Gregory no doubt had 35 excellent entries, how did he sift out this list so quickly!?

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/28/2020 6:07:00 PM

Congratulations on making the winner's list, Sandra.

John Hamilton

Date: 8/28/2020 5:18:00 PM

So sad Sandra congrats on being on the short winners list!