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Out of the weather
Our family together
With joyful chatter

By Robb A. Kopp
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Brandee Augustus

February 1, 2010 at 1:54 PM

Short and sweet! Very nice. Congratulations with this very unexpected yet refreshing win for this contest!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

January 31, 2010 at 8:10 AM

Congratulations Robb, on your Honorable Mention in The Rambling Poet’s “Home” Mini-Poetry contest with this loving, senryu. Your talent has placed you in the winners circle. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carolyn Devonshire

January 30, 2010 at 4:57 PM

Sounds like a delightful place to live, Robb. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn

January 29, 2010 at 1:49 PM

You've got me smiling with this one. Sounds like my family. Congratulations on being one of the winners in the Home contest. Enjoy your honor. Wishing you many more. Karen

Joyce Johnson

January 29, 2010 at 12:11 PM

Very nice. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Audrey Haick

January 28, 2010 at 5:51 PM

Beautiful home, Robb! God bless you all! Peace, Audrey

Margaret Foster

January 28, 2010 at 5:19 PM

Comfy and cozy. congratulations Robb...Margaret

Richard J. Long

January 28, 2010 at 3:28 PM

Robb, your poem reminds me of my families recent travels through a bad winter storm and how glad we were when we safely got to our in-laws house. Nicely put about family and togetherness.

Andrea Dietrich

January 28, 2010 at 12:32 PM

A joyous moment in time you have created with your poem. thanks for the little vocabulary lesson on anaphora. Yes, the French styles like rondel and rondeau employ that device so well. I just love those forms! Luv, andrea

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