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        Our Hills. 12 couplets    15 Syllables per line

Our Hills

Finding exalted pleasure playing happily in the hills.
Memories of the softly undulating land called the hills.

A welcome meeting place for frolicking in the sun with friends.
We could all be seen from afar playing on the grassy hills

Remembering Bob Moore trudged up the hill looking for Kelly.
She hadn’t been home, she was seen by many, playing on the hills.

A search party was organized to look for the missing child. 
All the wildflowers were trampled by the searchers on our hills.

We were all sent home that day, no one allowed to play at all.
Spending carefree days in the sun no more, all banned from the hills.

Police did their duty very well searching for dear Kelly.
They searched every one’s home after they looked all over the hills.

Rumors were rife in the Village about sweet Kelly missing.
Some folk believed evil lurked in the dark shadows of the hills.

We children missed our beloved playing, midst the soft grasses.
We stayed and did chores, no more fun, no more playing in the hills.

Noticed by some that old Mick hadn’t been with his cart of vegies.
Weekly he brought his cart full of produce from across the hills. 

Mick’s old, might be too much trekking his cart from market gardens.
Besides he might have heard there was troubled danger in the hills.

Concerned folk asked police check on him, make sure he was alright.
Mick was home, he was scared, he heard there was evil in the hills.

Curious, police checked his truck, opened, and they peered inside. 
There lay poor little Kelly, no more will she play in the hills.
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Kauffman Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Hi Wen! Back with congratulations on your wonderfully written poem. So happy to see it win a first place! Blessings!
Volumes Avatar
February 6, 2024 at 4:24 PM
Aw thank you Sam, it seems wrong somehow to receive credit for writing about such dreadful occurrence, but since I learned about it years ago it has been on my mind. In a quiet little village where every one knew everyone else, it was so completely unexpected. Your kind words will now stay in my memory also. With much appreciation Sam from Wen.
Kauffman Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 11:59 AM
Positively heartbreaking. Beautiful youth extinguished by the beast, SV! The beauty of nature and innocence skillfully juxtaposed with evil. Your ghazal takes me on a journey with smooth finesse! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings! Prayers for all of the missing children and their families!
Volumes Avatar
January 30, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Thank you Sam. I purposely approached the story gently, so as not to make it too morbid. Your understanding of the structure I endeavored to create is gratifying Sam. Your encouraging comment is welcomed and appreciated. Best wishes Wen.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 12:37 PM
Well done. Evil was lurking! A beautiful sight and happiness turns to terror and tragedy.
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January 17, 2024 at 2:54 PM
You can’t take your eyes off the kids. You’re right, the suspect could be the unsuspected. Just awful. We had an evil guy at the school I worked at. Thankfully he was let go.
Volumes Avatar
January 15, 2024 at 2:12 PM
Sadly Kim, its a true story. A couple in the USA that our family know, lost their little girl to a monster that no one suspected. Its a sad thing, but it seems that we cant let our children out of our site any more. Evil is lurking. Thanks for your comment.
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