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Our Heaven's In Sight

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the words of wild wonder are quiet, so still lost in translation the thunder, the thrill lines now just maim, they wound, and they kill but strength has returned, to live and to will flowered remembrance, I stamp and I crush I turn a deaf ear to yesterday's rush I dream in new plains, so vivid so lush paint pleasure's picture with this broken brush I smile and sojourn to idyllic plain serenaded by sun raptured by rain there is no poison, my life force to drain the breeze breathes blessings and wisdom I gain to land where I travel, come let me lead forget those past days, forget that you bleed my wings can carry, your soul can be freed I'll feed you my love, fulfill every need the flight won't be long, our heaven's in sight It's a thought away, a kiss in the night a tantalized tryst; desire's delight travel with me, to the sun, to the light

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/7/2015 8:43:00 AM

Hugs back, I also like the picture.

John Freeman

Date: 7/6/2015 8:40:00 PM

Yes Eileen a return to the light is needed! Agape, Moses

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:53:00 PM

The light is ever there, John. He does not forget this own, no matter where they wander.

Paul Callus

Date: 7/4/2015 8:38:00 AM

This is not an offer to think about, but one to accept without hesitation! The promise of desire's delight is too great to resist! Love this tempting poem; the rhyme s excellent. hugs // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:54:00 PM

One would think so, dear. Thanks for your lovely comment. I hope all is well. Hugs...

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/3/2015 5:40:00 PM

Wonderful imagery and depth to this piece. Your thoughts come alive and breathe within your words. An absolute delight to read with a flowing cadence that welcomes the experience. Emile.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:56:00 PM

I'm glad my heart and thoughts breathe in my words, Emile. It's so good to know that I can express my thoughts effectively. You used words that I love in your response....delight...cadence. Thank you.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2015 9:08:00 AM

I enjoyed traveling along the waves of your inspiration. you have added several more jewels to your crown. Ooh la la licious!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/6/2015 11:57:00 PM

Oh, Richard....you have the gift of encouragement, my dear....Jewels to my crown. What a beautiful post, and of course, that OOOHHHH la la licious brings joy! HUGS to you, my dear.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/2/2015 8:05:00 AM

The flight won't be long,our heaven 's in sight/It's a thought away ,a kiss in the night..I really lovvvveee these lines,and the poem is superb. A favourite!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/2/2015 1:28:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, dear Charmaine. Lovely to have you visit.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/1/2015 11:56:00 PM

mesmerizing write, enjoyed this *luv, p.d.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/2/2015 1:28:00 PM

Thank you, PD. Glad you had the time to visit. Congrats on POTD.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2015 11:45:00 PM

AHHH, A galactic kind of love poem. did I get that right? I am bad with sci fi names!! Eileen, I really appreciated what you said on my one fantasy poem. It means a lot to me. I notice your meter is really getting good! this has a very smooth flow to it, lady! make it about Mars and you will have your mars poem!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 7/2/2015 1:29:00 PM

Thanks, but no thanks. Mars holds no attraction. This is a poem that I had written and deleted. Thought I should revive it.