Our Hearts Put In Full Motion Like a Neon Ocean

Walking six inches off the ground
Knowing my life has finally found
A woman who wants to surround my heart
With a fresh new start

Our commitment would never depart
Bumpy roads keeping us apart
Now we are back on our way
Leftover feelings just wouldn't fade away
Oh the love that builds from yesterday

Has broken loose on a pathway
To a place, our love can finally play
Together we have both come to know
There is nothing better than love that shows
In a place, it will surely grow

Our life put in motion like a neon ocean
All because of our loving devotion
Satan playing on our every emotion
God foretelling our true notions
We are all done with that kind of commotion

Our future so bright knowing we have won the fight
To move forward upright into the sunlight
Where our hearts will ignite into flight
On a journey that will only excite
Knowing we have each other night after night

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 8/30/2018 9:37:00 AM
Wonderful read and a just fantastic title! Thoroughly enjoyed :) xomo!
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Date: 8/31/2018 8:46:00 PM
Thank you Maureen for your compliments and taking the time to read my work Jack.
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