Kim Rodrigues Poet Ottava rima

Our Heart Tore In Two

OUR HEART TORE IN TWO

     Together we hold a red paper heart,
     Our hands so close in warm proximity.

We grin from ear to crimson blush, Sweetheart.
Our palms touch ~ steam with equanimity,

     We are meant to be ~ you’re my counterpart.
     Yes ~ bestowed with God’s magnanimity.
   
Our heart tore in two ~ one for me and you.
Our warmth spreads ~ we cuddle -  she’s pink...he’s blue.

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Afzal Nusker January 24, 2017 at 11:33 PM A very complimentary contrast of pink and blue. Wonderful poem. Kim Rodrigues January 25, 2017 at 8:33 AM Thank you, Afzal!

Daniel Turner January 23, 2017 at 8:29 AM Reminds me of those necklaces and rings that come in twos. Each one containing half a heart. You give the other half to that special someone. Nice write, Mrs Kim. Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2017 at 8:51 AM Thank you, Daniel! Thank you for that wonderful image! My husband and I used to have those!

Chris Green January 23, 2017 at 7:16 AM I loved this Kim. This was so warm and tender and filled with love Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2017 at 7:26 AM Thank you, Chris! :)

Darren White January 23, 2017 at 1:47 AM Ottava rima, love it! And the image of the heart in two colours :) Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2017 at 6:51 AM Thank you, Darren!

Arthur Vaso January 22, 2017 at 8:34 PM Hi Kim, simply beautiful and sweet! Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2017 at 9:10 PM Thanks so much, Arthur!