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Our Heart Tore In Two

OUR HEART TORE IN TWO

     Together we hold a red paper heart,
     Our hands so close in warm proximity.

We grin from ear to crimson blush, Sweetheart.
Our palms touch ~ steam with equanimity,

     We are meant to be ~ you’re my counterpart.
     Yes ~ bestowed with God’s magnanimity.
   
Our heart tore in two ~ one for me and you.
Our warmth spreads ~ we cuddle -  she’s pink...he’s blue.

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2017

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Afzal Nusker Date: 1/24/2017 11:33:00 PM A very complimentary contrast of pink and blue. Wonderful poem. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/25/2017 8:33:00 AM Thank you, Afzal!

Daniel Turner Date: 1/23/2017 8:29:00 AM Reminds me of those necklaces and rings that come in twos. Each one containing half a heart. You give the other half to that special someone. Nice write, Mrs Kim. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2017 8:51:00 AM Thank you, Daniel! Thank you for that wonderful image! My husband and I used to have those!

Chris Green Date: 1/23/2017 7:16:00 AM I loved this Kim. This was so warm and tender and filled with love Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2017 7:26:00 AM Thank you, Chris! :)

Darren White Date: 1/23/2017 1:47:00 AM Ottava rima, love it! And the image of the heart in two colours :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2017 6:51:00 AM Thank you, Darren!

Arthur Vaso Date: 1/22/2017 8:34:00 PM Hi Kim, simply beautiful and sweet! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/22/2017 9:10:00 PM Thanks so much, Arthur!