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Our Grains of Sand

Our days can slip on by like grains of sand- how they might fall where they lay may grant ease. Best counts on how we sculpt those neath our feet to shape life's passageway till they run out. September 10, 2020 Contest: Double Tetractys 2 Sponsor: Eve Roper Photo: 2 Syllables: 10, 4, 3, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3, 4, 10
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September 17, 2020 at 7:09 PM
Lovely write,Sandra .. Congrats on your wonderful win :) <3 Hugs Eve..
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September 11, 2020 at 3:55 PM
A great piece for the contest, Caren!! The challenge is beautifully met with and then it leads to present the realities of life!!
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