Our Friendship...

Do you see what i see?
Do you feel what i feel?
Can you tell me if its really real?

A soft touch and a gentle kiss
A gentlemen with courage and wits

A shy but sweet enchanting miss
scared to love, inexperienced

A lonely quiet day like this,
makes me wonder if love exist

A sea of tears, I cried this evening,
for my mind has told me to stop believing
for love has stopped looking for me

Do you see what I see?

Discovered treasures, from up above
extreme measures, forbidden love

A love for one, A like for another
what is it you see? friends or lovers
Looking for the love, even if it hurts
for bad,good,better or worse

Because life is full of pain, and that's what keeps us living
It keeps us strong, gives us strength to remain standing

Flowers that blossom when watered just right
Is my heart meeting love? for the very first time? 

Forbidden pleasures , stories untold
burning bodies and hindered souls

A gleaming smile that lights the room
blinded to others, for I have noticed you

A relationship, you don't want
but a friendship you'll receive 
So I'm giving you this chance
to discover all that's within me

There is so much more here
just waiting to be found
A gift that keeps on giving, 
so much love to go around

Embraced the lust,discovered jewels
mistaken trust, lonely fools

Could this really happen? a hidden fantasy?
Or could we have a future?
Do you see what I see?

Feeling the way I feel about you
this burning desire that wants one to become two

I opened my heart only once in this life 
but then I met you and that once became twice

You touched me , like no one has touched
in a very long time

When you kissed me, that was the night my light began to shine
not afraid to live, not afraid to be, 
just to live in that moment shared between you and me

The most expensive gift 
I could ever receive,
Was when you told me i was beautiful
And i started to believe

So much pain I often feel 
the hurt and the sorrow became so unreal 
And then I met you...

From  bitter to laughter, from tears to smiles
from compassion to passion and fire to desire

You brought out these feelings
from a very dark place
So much of my emotions are greatly misplaced

Forget me not,for my heart is true
for I know distance,time,and gods grace will carry us through

Because we're friends, I have no doubt
that we will one day figure out, 

If what we share is meant to lead,
to something much more beautifully

Forbidden love 
Broken rules	
Fragrance of passion
Discovered jewels
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 2/23/2009 9:06:00 PM
wow this write makes it a one of a kind.I loved the write.thank you for reading my poem.it means alot,i'm a new poet.and i'm just trying to get people to read my work.thanks and a great write again
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Date: 1/5/2009 6:22:00 AM
I sense the possibility here of something wonderful, a ray of hope. You have captured your emotions so beautifully here and touched the reader's heart. I hope this spark ignites and shines as bright as the sun for you. If it is meant to be, it will of course. Warmest wishes. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/5/2009 2:27:00 AM
Very beautiful, and inrospective, and again, I can really relate. I had a very dark and difficult and traumatic childhood, and have had a long journey to overcome it all...but yes, it is wonderful when one can finally see the beautiful in self, instead of negativity. :) Love, Kristin
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Date: 1/3/2009 9:54:00 AM
Beautiful write, always, Christy
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