Our Forever

Oceans moves in waves
each single heartbeat grasping
claws of steel holding

Trance like beautiful
your every wish come true wings
of a spirit spread

Flying majestic 
beauty one golden eagle
power draws inside 

Flying high one soul
from an imagination
a gravity pull

Sweetly emotions 
singing illusions, one dream
reality kicks

In the arrow strikes
what a fantasy dream sits
feeling floating rose

Essence butterflies
fluttering blossoms sweetly
Explosion hotly

A soul it sang in 
one heart that gave wings sharing
a meal delight you

You sipped wine with grace
an amazing smile I could
feel the blood rushing

If I lost you love 
a lone wolf will forever 
howl to her face sad

Tears sweet surrender
never ending searching space
full of love howling

Felt like kneeling at
your feet adoring beauty
you will always be

Oath of forever 
love that very night to you
smiling beautiful 

You lit up such love
flames on fire with your 
grasping talons hot 

Took hold of me deep
your smile was amazing cute
drawing one starlight

Eternity calls
the power of destiny  
one in a thousand 

You lit up such love
flames on fire with your 
grasping talons hot 

Wishes trance like hold
beautiful in every wish 
granted came true love

Silver shadows in 
the deep ocean treasure gem
dancing ripples leap

Liquid silver paint
shimmering moon reflections
mirror distant thoughts

Golden the pathway
walking across rippling in
body, one deep love

Feelings begin to
hold in, emotions sings out 
we join together

Passionately we
kiss with all inside my heart
I love you sweet babe



This I co wrote with an amazing beauty on site twenty one the key to the heart's door
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 9/13/2014 4:24:00 PM
On the whole, this set of haiku is rich and expressive. Much enjoyed. I too agree with what Andrea said....haiku tends to tie you down when the material you are dealing with offers such wide possibilities. // paul
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Date: 9/13/2014 1:27:00 AM
Excellent. Outstanding work. Enjoyed . Tfs
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Date: 9/13/2014 1:25:00 AM
It is an extremely lovely feeling when you write with someone,, and here I love the intricate lines, they are rich with suggestive beauty.. Nice work, Liam! Liam is it, hope I got it right!
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Date: 9/12/2014 9:59:00 PM
This is really pretty. So nice to jive well with a co-writer!! I wonder why you two just don't free verse it!! Free yourself of haiku's limiting syllable count. I think you could soar!!
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Date: 9/12/2014 5:19:00 PM
Delightful romantic write Liam!
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Date: 9/12/2014 4:39:00 PM
Wow these are gorgeous!
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Date: 9/12/2014 3:19:00 PM
- Woow .... Liam ......... they are soooo beautiful all of them!!!!! - (And I'm struggling to write 3 lines .... :) - So talented you are !!!! - Happy weekend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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