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Our First Pledge

Slow fog dances along the river’s edge Mingling with the flowering dusty sedge, And climbing up the rocky granite ledge Where you and I made our first pledge. written September 21, 20212

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Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/22/2021 2:15:00 AM

Lovely memories...Delice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/22/2021 9:53:00 AM

Thank you, Delice. I always appreciate your comments.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/21/2021 9:23:00 PM

Ah, how beautifully done. Memories are marvelous!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/22/2021 9:54:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. They sure are. What would we do without them?

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/21/2021 11:23:00 AM

Precious moments Milton that stay with you forever. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/21/2021 1:19:00 PM

Yes indeed, Tom. Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment.