Our First Pledge

Slow fog dances along the river’s edge Mingling with the flowering dusty sedge, And climbing up the rocky granite ledge Where you and I made our first pledge.
written September 21, 20212
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Skelly Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 2:15 AM
Lovely memories...Delice
Hankins Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 9:53 AM
Thank you, Delice. I always appreciate your comments.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 9:23 PM
Ah, how beautifully done. Memories are marvelous!
Hankins Avatar
September 22, 2021 at 9:54 AM
Thanks, Caren. They sure are. What would we do without them?
Cunningham Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Precious moments Milton that stay with you forever. Tom
Hankins Avatar
September 21, 2021 at 1:19 PM
Yes indeed, Tom. Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment.
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