Our First

Sitting high on a throne of emotions,
At the last stop down memory lane.
Though they might just be some obscure visions,
You were once held captive under their reign.
Happiness, sadness or regret you feel,
Its the one thing you will never let go.
Moving on from it might have seemed surreal,
But you did so its time to let it show.
Just ‘cause you left doesn’t mean you forget.
Of course, you shouldn’t feel miserable
‘Cause when you get over, never regret.
By then, its always unattainable.
At times, your first can’t always be your last
But if it is, do your best, and make it a blast.c
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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September 14, 2026 at 10:44 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
Agustin Avatar
January 13, 2025 at 10:36 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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January 19, 2016 at 12:38 PM
QUEENE,, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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February 28, 2015 at 9:26 PM
Hi Queene, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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February 28, 2015 at 9:18 PM
Queene, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@
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