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our fate was to part

i do not speak nor dream of you seldom do i think of you but when i see you my mind is schemeing my heart is bleeding and i am praying my eyes won't betray me for my temptation is so great for a moment i long for your tender embrace for a moment i long to touch your sweet face for a moment i think of your warm lips on mine as lastly i dream of our bodies entwined then i remember the lies you so frequently told ah, i remember the nights and how they grew cold i think of the pain that pierced through my heart your love was like poison and our fate was to part

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Date: 7/16/2013 3:36:00 PM
Yeah, I agree with Drake...I do like this one as well. This one is cold with the lingering remnants of warmth. Very Good! MC
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Date: 7/15/2013 10:08:00 AM
Vicious, yet that longing tenderness remained in silhouettes. Poweful & sad piece! Great job!
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