Our Fate Is Set

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I'm aware that I'll face my ending. Because it's self-evident. The start and the finale. I'm sure I'll desire for my fantasy. Because it is feasible. The happening of the fall. I'm confident that I'll be able to breathe hope. Because it is in short supply. The fate's date and the timing of its onset. Nonetheless, I will live my moments. Because it is plentiful. The sorrows and the memory

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/10/2021 7:09:00 AM

Once you are born, the date of your death is stamped on your hand. It's God rule.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/10/2021 4:37:00 AM

Food for thought, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Each one of us should follow your line of thinking. Blessings.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/9/2021 9:23:00 PM

I'm aware that I'll face my ending. Because it's self-evident. The start and the finale.....nice start to this piece Lasaad...Delice