S.Jagathsimhan Nair Poet Acrostic

Our Fall-2

October’s second half brings us new rains,
Copious and pouring with sodden days.
Torrential it turns and then it but wanes,
Our winter sets in with less of sun’s blaze.
But for cool nights, sans bark and bite it stays,
Efforts at birth control take a nosedive,
Respite from high heat is all we derive.




** Acrostic/ Rhyme Royal

Contest: "Fall is around the corner" sponsored by CAROL BROWN

By:  S.Jagathsimhan Nair,   01 sept  11

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Lee Ramage September 7, 2011 at 11:56 PM Interesting take on fall where you live. Thanks for sharing. Lee

Dr.Ram Mehta September 7, 2011 at 10:01 PM Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol,,Nair

Cyndi Macmillan September 7, 2011 at 9:44 PM Oh, hot in the cool! Well done! Congrats, Cyndi

John Freeman September 7, 2011 at 9:03 PM Jag, A pleasure to see! Congratulations on your worthy poem's third place. Agape, Moses

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2011 at 7:40 PM Congrats on your winning work..Sara

David Williams September 7, 2011 at 2:04 PM hey Jag congrats on your win, loved it..David

Carolyn Devonshire September 7, 2011 at 1:42 PM Excellent acrostic, S. This is one of the most "poetic sounding" acrostics I've ever read. Love the line about the torrential raains that wane and the way you were able to make it rhyme. Great write! Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud September 7, 2011 at 1:21 PM there you fo, jag..… a happy blast of CHEERS to you for the great win..:) huggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 7, 2011 at 11:20 AM Congrats Jag on third place win with this cool wwrite on Fall luv.. another dynamo piece ...

Caryl Ramsdale September 7, 2011 at 11:19 AM Congratulations on your placement in the "FALL IS AROUND THE CORNER" poetry contest sponsored by Carol Brown. CR

Carol Sunshine Brown September 7, 2011 at 10:46 AM Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jag. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich September 2, 2011 at 2:46 AM I hope I am remembering this right. YOu are JOey,right?(or not?) I really like this one of yours. Some great descriptions in it and good luck in the contest.

Poet Destroyer A September 2, 2011 at 12:42 AM A real nice acrostic,... especially because I'm an October baby... thank you for sharing,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 1, 2011 at 10:10 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Jag. Love, Carol