Our Effervescence

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"conjoined with the whole
we play our life role
exuding a scent
granting love consent" - Unseeking Seeker


How wonderful if like a fizzy drink
we all would sparkle with effervescence
which with love’s divine aroma could link
us all together with the florescence
of a spirituality so sweet
that with great excitement we’d be spilling
over in our talents with desire to treat
one another with love. Oh, how thrilling -
using our life roles to lift each other
as the world’s creator would have us do,
for everyone's our sister or brother!
Life’s burdens we can help each other through
if kindness we show more than simply speak.
Exude the joy and brightness we all seek!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 8/24/2025 8:29:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem, Andrea. This poem is a winner to me.
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Date: 8/23/2025 12:53:00 PM
Lovely, excellent, uplifting, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 8/23/2025 11:27:00 AM
I love the “fizzy drink” comparison. Immediately starts me in a happy place and inspires from there. Another great poem!
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Date: 8/22/2025 10:41:00 PM
Beautiful and inspiring.Nice to share.
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Date: 8/22/2025 9:20:00 PM
Andrea, This Sonnet's appeal, more than just aroma. Markings of a keen mind probably. In any case, we could use more joy. Best wishes for your week-end in summer. -Richard
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Date: 8/22/2025 5:51:00 PM
Inspiring - :) love your take on this prompt, Andrea
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Date: 8/22/2025 5:19:00 PM
great message, we can help each other for sure thanks poet
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Date: 8/22/2025 4:04:00 PM
using our life roles to lift each other as the world’s creator would have us do…so true!
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