Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Our Earthly Appetites

In our earthly appetites our love is now one
To hear your heartbeat next to mine always
Oh yes—a sweet beautiful rose of paradise 
You came to me by the river my bonnie lass
While branches of birds whistled tunes of love
Drifting on a summer breeze warmly whispering
Moaning as gentle thoughts murmur your name
Carried on a majestic breath of warm luscious air 
With echoing babbles from a most precious maiden
Memories with one dream holding a forget-me-not 
Unveiling so fair your impression left on my heart 
Dancing on every pulse beat sweetly sings a siren
I watch the sun as it fades into the deep blue sea 
We both sail upon one warm beauty breeze of sighs 
While behind these eyes the truth forever is dawning 
One flower nods in a rainbow array far beyond compare 
While you who drink from love’s very chalice so true
A magical and enchanting blessing holding no disguise 
You’re the breath of my life and existence my love

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem,
Copyright © All Rights Reserved (July 21, 2015) (Free Verse)

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Paul Callus July 25, 2015 at 3:25 PM Romantic imagery that breathes life into this love poem. You two, Gary & Liam, have become really good at writing together; only at the end did I realize that this was a collab!! Top marks to you! // paul

Arthur Vaso July 21, 2015 at 8:56 PM Hi there liam, you and Gary have done it again, soon I will have to call you Simon and Garfunkel. Beautifully romantic prose!

Gary Bateman July 21, 2015 at 3:20 PM Hello Liam Mate!! I think the "Leprechaun Choir" is singing a heartfelt paean of joy and celebration over this enchanting love poem. (I'm biased of course!!) Thanks too for getting it posted!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen July 21, 2015 at 1:28 PM - A song about beautiful love ..... the wind and birds leads it to anyone who takes the time to listen and feel - A beautiful poem Liam & Gary !!! - (T.r.) - I really enjoy reading it - (Liam, I will work with your words tomorrow :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter July 21, 2015 at 10:46 AM Hi Liam n' Gary!Another very beautiful romantic, passionate and captivating love poem written by you my dearest friend Liam,in collaboration with our very dear friend Gary.Just dazzling!A very beautiful,romantic, dreamy, sweet n' enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.A real gem!I surely enjoyed it.Great imagery.I love it!Just awesome!So very beautifully written.Very fantastic collaboration!A 7+++ to each!A fav.Your pens are truly mighty golden.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!Keep your Faith Liam.In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^