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Our Death

Neptune will cry for our death 
Fragments of sea blood 
Temblor of regards 
Condolences from Poseidon 
Exhaling ciaos, inhaling mists 
And all else Jupiter, once more 
 
All yellow bleeds fire 
None could inhume his dolour 
Grams of sorrow, forcely collected 
Twining clouds and forming seas 
Autarkic trumpets would sing  
As colors received by Uranus

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/25/2016 8:24:00 AM
Beautiful, cosmic imagery!!! Congrats Hans, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)
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Date: 1/23/2016 12:04:00 PM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
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Date: 1/17/2016 11:25:00 AM
At least someone has taken notice if I get this right. You have a very unusual and profound way of expressing segments of life. You are making my brain heat up!!
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