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Our Dance

My eyes dark brown
Yours so intensely blue
I smile when I hear
That deep sigh from you

We’re a country apart
It’s impossible some say
But passion felt so deeply
Must always have its day

Our hearts dance with intimacy
Choreographed with time and trust
You sigh and say, “Dreams can come true”
I smile and whisper, “This one must”

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Written 10-24-2015

Copyright © Susan Gentry | Year Posted 2015

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Timothy Mcguire Date: 7/5/2018 9:33:00 PM Absolutely beautiful! Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 7/6/2018 1:42:00 AM Thank you, Timothy!

Vladislav Raven Date: 2/17/2016 9:24:00 PM Hi Susan, i can relate to this one, there is a great pond, the Atlantic ocean between my Kentucky Rose and myself. Our Love will last and we may one day be able to meet, but whether we do or not the Love will always be strong. A beautiful poem you lay before us, Love shall always have its day. Believe. This write has to be a seven Susan. Have a good day....Vlad. Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/21/2016 5:13:00 AM Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I hope it works out for you and your Kentucky rose. I appreciate the 7!

Joseph May Date: 1/28/2016 10:57:00 AM Beautiful and romantic ... A 7... Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 2/1/2016 11:37:00 AM Thank you so much Joseph!!!!

Pashang Salehi Date: 1/11/2016 12:50:00 AM Very nice... Are you in love? Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 1/11/2016 8:24:00 PM Thanks for reading, you are so sweet :)

Joseph May Date: 12/29/2015 5:22:00 PM A lovely write Susan... best wishes Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 12/29/2015 9:12:00 PM Thsnk you! Appreciate you taking time like you have. Glad you enjoyed.

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/27/2015 7:13:00 AM Indeed we are. Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/24/2015 8:13:00 AM This is so sweet. My darling has brown eyes and mine are blue. We met in Mexico and I later moved 4000 miles to be with her. 23 years later I am still the happiest man alive. Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 11/26/2015 8:53:00 PM Ahhh! Glad you could relate to it. 23 years is remarkable! Sounds like you both are blessed.

Robert Lindley Date: 11/21/2015 1:09:00 AM Great poem , smooth all the way. Last stanza seals the deal! A7 Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 11/26/2015 8:53:00 PM Thanks so much for reading and for the kind words.