Susan Gentry Poet Rhyme

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Our Dance

My eyes dark brown
Yours so intensely blue
I smile when I hear
That deep sigh from you

We’re a country apart
It’s impossible some say
But passion felt so deeply
Must always have its day

Our hearts dance with intimacy
Choreographed with time and trust
You sigh and say, “Dreams can come true”
I smile and whisper, “This one must”

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Written 10-24-2015

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Timothy Mcguire July 5, 2018 at 9:33 PM Absolutely beautiful! Susan Gentry July 6, 2018 at 1:42 AM Thank you, Timothy!

Vladislav Raven February 17, 2016 at 9:24 PM Hi Susan, i can relate to this one, there is a great pond, the Atlantic ocean between my Kentucky Rose and myself. Our Love will last and we may one day be able to meet, but whether we do or not the Love will always be strong. A beautiful poem you lay before us, Love shall always have its day. Believe. This write has to be a seven Susan. Have a good day....Vlad. Susan Gentry March 21, 2016 at 5:13 AM Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I hope it works out for you and your Kentucky rose. I appreciate the 7!

Joseph May January 28, 2016 at 10:57 AM Beautiful and romantic ... A 7... Susan Gentry February 1, 2016 at 11:37 AM Thank you so much Joseph!!!!

Pashang Salehi January 11, 2016 at 12:50 AM Very nice... Are you in love? Susan Gentry January 11, 2016 at 8:24 PM Thanks for reading, you are so sweet :)

Joseph May December 29, 2015 at 5:22 PM A lovely write Susan... best wishes Susan Gentry December 29, 2015 at 9:12 PM Thsnk you! Appreciate you taking time like you have. Glad you enjoyed.

Richard Lamoureux November 27, 2015 at 7:13 AM Indeed we are.

Richard Lamoureux November 24, 2015 at 8:13 AM This is so sweet. My darling has brown eyes and mine are blue. We met in Mexico and I later moved 4000 miles to be with her. 23 years later I am still the happiest man alive. Susan Gentry November 26, 2015 at 8:53 PM Ahhh! Glad you could relate to it. 23 years is remarkable! Sounds like you both are blessed.

Robert Lindley November 21, 2015 at 1:09 AM Great poem , smooth all the way. Last stanza seals the deal! A7 Susan Gentry November 26, 2015 at 8:53 PM Thanks so much for reading and for the kind words.