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My eyes dark brown Yours so intensely blue I smile when I hear That deep sigh from you We’re a country apart It’s impossible some say But passion felt so deeply Must always have its day Our hearts dance with intimacy Choreographed with time and trust You sigh and say, “Dreams can come true” I smile and whisper, “This one must” +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ Written 10-24-2015

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 7/5/2018 9:33:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful!

Susan Gentry
Date: 7/6/2018 1:42:00 AM

Thank you, Timothy!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 2/17/2016 9:24:00 PM

Hi Susan, i can relate to this one, there is a great pond, the Atlantic ocean between my Kentucky Rose and myself. Our Love will last and we may one day be able to meet, but whether we do or not the Love will always be strong. A beautiful poem you lay before us, Love shall always have its day. Believe. This write has to be a seven Susan. Have a good day....Vlad.

Susan Gentry
Date: 3/21/2016 5:13:00 AM

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! I hope it works out for you and your Kentucky rose. I appreciate the 7!

Joseph May

Date: 1/28/2016 10:57:00 AM

Beautiful and romantic ... A 7...

Susan Gentry
Date: 2/1/2016 11:37:00 AM

Thank you so much Joseph!!!!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 1/11/2016 12:50:00 AM

Very nice... Are you in love?

Susan Gentry
Date: 1/11/2016 8:24:00 PM

Thanks for reading, you are so sweet :)

Joseph May

Date: 12/29/2015 5:22:00 PM

A lovely write Susan... best wishes

Susan Gentry
Date: 12/29/2015 9:12:00 PM

Thsnk you! Appreciate you taking time like you have. Glad you enjoyed.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/27/2015 7:13:00 AM

Indeed we are.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/24/2015 8:13:00 AM

This is so sweet. My darling has brown eyes and mine are blue. We met in Mexico and I later moved 4000 miles to be with her. 23 years later I am still the happiest man alive.

Susan Gentry
Date: 11/26/2015 8:53:00 PM

Ahhh! Glad you could relate to it. 23 years is remarkable! Sounds like you both are blessed.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/21/2015 1:09:00 AM

Great poem , smooth all the way. Last stanza seals the deal! A7

Susan Gentry
Date: 11/26/2015 8:53:00 PM

Thanks so much for reading and for the kind words.