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Our Comings And Goings
Signals concerning streams of tones in lights, Quadrillion twenty to being precise, Derivations a formidable chore, Left for later, time for us to explore, Of a dying world now eon lifeless, Once home to living beings most like us, A passing records a race of humans, Records a mass planetary movements, No mass exodus has been recorded, Signals nova near, we have been ordered, Farewell, planet...what was this planet named, Earth, Farewell Planet Earth--none, that's ashamed, As planet explodes to oblivion, Perchance we may bump into one of them.
2020 February 13 STRAND SELECT O ,any form ,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand Rhyme Scheme; aabb, ccdd, eeff, gg.

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Date: 9/10/2019 11:45:00 PM
Thought provoking. When Jesus comes back there will be a new heaven and a new earth which I look forward to. God bless you.
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Date: 9/11/2019 12:02:00 AM
Amen to that Regina ~ Aloha always William

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