Our Coat

Was it all my fault? 
Did i let you down or did i not?
Did i put our love off, did i let it rot?
Did i dissipate the feelings we once sought?

Were we always so hopeless or was it just me?
We were like ice and snow, alike to a degree.
We were both cold, frozen so much
But your heart was cold, mine froze to touch

But you're just a memory
A faded ghost town
Just a memory
Yet i still need you around

Your words kept me warm
Your touch kept me alive
Without either...

I feel so.. so alone
Left to my feelings
Left to atone
For my wrongs 
for my faults
for the dumb things i did

I kept a coat just for your ghost
Because it was your words i yearned for most
Just another "Hi" or greeting or farewell
Anything out your mouth before we fell

But now I'm gone just another spirit
I'm both dead and alive yet i still feel it...
The lingering heat yet frozen cold
The things we promised until we grew old.
Was our love just a white lie?
Or was it my...

Was it all OUR fault?
Did we let us down or did we not?
Did we put our love off, did we let it rot?
Did we dissipate the feelings we once sought?

I'm left alone in the rain
Sitting next to our tree
names engraved in the bark, J+C
Now I'm alone in the dark, so empty.

Why would you leave when i still stayed?
why would you hurt me and walk away?
Why would you go and never look back?
Why would you leave my doors open
Just a crack

Now i chill on the rooftops, headphones in
Carved our names in the dust? I did
I'll never get over our little J+C
Now we're..
I...
Am alone, but so empty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 22, 2026 at 8:47 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to work with you and bring your poem to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
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