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Seeker's Claim to fame contest  ~  9/15/25

Our Claim to Fame

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“death approaches but we have no regret ~
when God questions us, we will stand erect."


Though ailing on my deathbed, someday I will be
no claim to fame and glory will I seek for me.
No title of greatness nor prize of stardom won
for nothing truly remarkable in life have I done.

I shall not whimper if death hovers, nor shed a tear.
It is not my lack humility or a merciless God I fear.
Aware of my faults; He knows I've things to regret
No angelic halo circles my head, nor divine coronet.

If near death, I should feel His presence in command,
I'd prostrate myself before Him, for I dare not stand.
Down on my knees in praise, is where  I'd belong
I'm but a grain of sand, a human who's done wrong.

No questions does God need ask. He knows my heart.
Faith in Him is my bulwark, my haven, my rampart.
I am not a worthy soul to look upon my Creator's face,
On the verge of death, I'll rely on His mercy and grace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 9/17/2025 4:31:00 PM
I would say, “You made me in Your image… that went well.” Seriously, Lin, I hadn’t noticed that contest or where you came in it, but anything including ‘First’ was a worthy win. Terry
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Date: 9/17/2025 10:15:00 AM
This makes me ponder. Life has coarsened my belief. I am happy to read of the purity of spirit in your poem. I takes me back.
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Date: 9/15/2025 6:07:00 PM
there is a song entitled "what if god was one of us"...it lead me to ask "what if god is all of us". Not sure what that has to do with anything but it popped into my head as I read your poem. A very nicely done poet pondering Lin
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Date: 9/15/2025 10:41:00 AM
Beautiful poem. Sure winner.
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Date: 9/15/2025 9:40:00 AM
Lin, you created a humble perspective for those who believe. I like it a lot since we do know that nothing lasts forever. And would we need to toot our own horn in front of any almighty presence if one actually shows up? Well, I think your strategy would definitely provide an advantage getting thru the pearly gates! Anyway, LOL and smiles!!! I hope you don't mind my irreverence! You are amazing!!!
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Date: 9/15/2025 9:24:00 AM
Excellent!! I never know how I will fare in these types of contests. For me, this one looks like a winner.
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