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Our Chief End

Though it seems that somehow things are not quite right now, When the end is in sight, He will put all things right. Is life fair? Thank God, not. We misjudge our dire lot. Standards used: others’ wrong; shadows cast: dark and long. Gravity: where begin? Misperceive weight of sin. Cast our cares upon him; comes the day He’ll stand in. Our chief end: enjoy Son for all time, praise works done. ---------- Kind of bizarre - this is an Irish quatrain called a 'Cethramtu Rannaigechta Moire', but it just appears to be a quatrain with xaxa rhyme scheme and 3-syllable lines... A bit of a mouthful for something so simple... https://www.writersdigest.com/write-better-poetry/cethramtu-rannaigechta-moire-poetic-asides

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Date: 10/12/2022 5:53:00 PM
You DO make it so look so easy... As for me, I can make the easy look difficult... lol.
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Date: 10/12/2022 3:46:00 PM
You make it look so easy! And with such a powerful message to boot!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/12/2022 4:07:00 PM
Thanks, Becky - I think I need to try a number of different things to get the hang of this one - seems like they could be light/funny ones too.
Date: 10/12/2022 3:30:00 PM
Thanks for sharing Jeff...
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 10/12/2022 3:32:00 PM
There's a lot of neat stuff at that writer's digest site...

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