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Our Brains

Our brains become somewhat rutted Running constantly within the same track But let someone confront with deeper wisdom Then our lightbulb can be turned back (on) For some it would be easier to run a mudslide Back up the slippery slope of time Than to get the brain to light up and burn From new ideas, knowledge to absorb

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John Beam

Date: 7/12/2010 1:19:00 PM

thank you for comment enjoyed reading this one where ever the Spirit leads

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/7/2010 6:50:00 AM

like the movement in this gem! Sara! and thanks for your feedback early this am! jimbo

Lynette Chachere

Date: 7/6/2010 5:41:00 AM

id have to really think on this, because my own mind is crazy, i don't even believe we control our concious mind, our body does, but through wisdom, it will listen. amazing write, ~Always&Forever Lynette

Susan Mills

Date: 7/3/2010 5:38:00 PM

I like your thinking and your poem about the generation of ideas. Thanks for your perspective on my poems. Love, Susan

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/2/2010 4:48:00 PM

You're so right, Sara. I don't understand why people don't relish knowledge and new ideas. Guess we're running out of light bulbs. Sad, but true. Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 7/2/2010 4:43:00 PM

Hey lady, you hit the nail right square on the head with this powerful write. The truth, if ever it was told. Wisdom in todays carnal mind driven world is met like a plague unleased to do harm. When actually it is the only thing that will save us from destruction of the mind driven greed; that loves the dollar. Agape, Moses