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SUCH A SIGJHT I SAW,
The rippling of the waves lapping over the golden shore ,
The billowing ocean shimmering in the darting starlight,
It makes me feel relaxed as if everything else in life has wandered away,
SUCH A SIGHT I SAW.

SUCH A SMELL I SMELT,
As the sea salt rumbled into foam
As it blew up the beach,
And into the distance,
SUCH A SMELL I SMELT.

SUCH A TASTE I TASTED,
The cooling ice cream trickling gently down my throat,
It refreshes me from the tips of my toes,
SUCH A TASTE I TASTED.

SUCH A SOFT TOUCH I FELT,
Water sprinkling over the plam of my hand,
I was so relaxed and calm,
such a soft touch i felt.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Agustin Avatar
June 11, 2025 at 5:38 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 7:41 PM
DANIELLE, Excellent poem, Awesome flow. Luv ** SKAT **
Brown Avatar
July 1, 2009 at 12:17 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Danielle. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
June 30, 2009 at 10:13 AM
Terrific write of the senses Danielle>>James
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