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Our Blessed America the Fair

America, fought by our brave fallen few,
Our men and women who honored our flag,
Our nation freedoms grow strong,
Our government is thought to be a democracy, gangocracy or mobocracy,
Our impetus, the Napoleonic Wars when Latin America became republics,
Our consequence is a country that has a fair representation of its people,
Our forefathers who created, the US Constitution and defined quite clear,
Our nation is a Republic, one under God,
Our laws make us great as if written by pencil where we can erase, 
Our wrongs can be amended,
Our rights will protect us,
America is truly blessed.


2020 January 02     *2nd Place*
Whitman-Inspired Uplifting Poetry, old or new Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire
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Kauffman Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:12 PM
William - Congratulations on your win. I love the way to point out that we are a republic with "laws" that can be changed with a pencil. Really wonderful image.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:19 PM
Thank you, Sam, I am appreciative for your extended courtesies~@wk
Roper Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:00 PM
Great write, William, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 3:02 PM
Thanks again Eve, so very much~@wk
Devonshire Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 1:36 PM
America truly is blessed, William. Even when our country's capital is in turmoil, our pride stands strong. A wonderful, joyful ode. Congratulations on a second place in the contest! Best wishes, Carolyn
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 20, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Blessings Carolyn, for I am humbled by your placement of me~@wk
Wren-Ingalls Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 10:07 PM
This is a great poem! I love how you talk about laws, "we can erase," is immediately followed by our ability to make amends. This is brilliant and patriotic!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 3, 2020 at 11:34 PM
Thank you, my friend, for your kind thought, much-appreciated ~@wk
Pandit Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Very patriotic and uplifting thoughts, William--the essence of your photo reflects in your words.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
January 2, 2020 at 10:29 AM
Thanks, Vijay for both your astute thoughts and observation~@wk
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