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Our Better Angels

Written: July 26, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh *********** When anger swirls and trust cheats, When hearts rupture and hope is heavy. Our brave backs fight, and our loud teams meet. With sounds that spin and a wonderful levy. A reaper walks by the schoolyard gate, Where apathy switched in the weight. Neglect takes away everything neat, If angels lack air, im deaden noisy street. Not tracing bright lines, they walk in twilight, But bask in bold acts that banish the night— A hand that helps, a spirit so slight, But wants honesty and does what's right. Born under obligations, if wealth bleeds. Florists must cope with the gnarly weeds. They scatter lesser sympathy seeds, And provide them with generous deeds. In each enchanting echo of the moored, In actions overlooked, obscured. They sculpt rocks to form what should— A wondrous world of whimsy, not just of could. So when we bow below the boastful storm, And wrath would well, a wild waveform. These tender tutors, though not the norm, Rekindle reminders that romance transforms. One soul could shed that armored pride, And wear peace pulsing deep inside. Let humble hands reach children’s flame, To rise beyond the hate and blame.

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Date: 7/27/2025 2:22:00 AM
Even in the midst of storm, some continue to be good angels. They try to bring light in darkness, raise a helping hand, remain honest and just. They work where 'neglect takes away everything neat' and do bold acts that banish the night. Love the last stanza and the beautiful rhyming. All the best, dear Lasaad.
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Date: 7/26/2025 4:29:00 PM
this poem resonated with me! You're truly gifted with writing many poetic forms, something I aspire to be. Seriously! I especially liked the first and last verses. Best wishes with this contest & enjoy your weekend, Sara
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Date: 7/26/2025 6:00:00 AM
Dear Sotto, such a poignant reflection on struggle, resilience, and hope amid darkness. I love how in your poem you honor those quiet, brave souls who choose kindness and honesty even when surrounded by chaos. ..Hugs
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