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Our Best Summer

We had no cares we had no cars just ourselves, the night and a fistful of stars There were no problems just four friends and a park the initials carved there to leave a small mark Best times of my life God if only I knew they were gone in a whisper as the wind blew That's when it ended as I sit in our park alone three empty swings in some park I had known

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/12/2011 8:31:00 PM
Ryan,,, it happens here all the time..love and parks always fall apart... but in Gods, eye..something will always remain..enjoyed,..p.d.
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