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Our baby boy................. When your mother was crying in pain, I took her to hospital, then I heard your mother's loud scream along with your soft cry Your mother brought you into this world as an angel. You were lying next to your mother innocently My son, your cry brought tears of love in my eyes When I looked at you first my heart filled with happiness You were looking very healthy boy You were trying to look at me through your fresh new eyes I saw your tiny legs were rocking in the air and your tiny hands were clapping for me I gave one of my finger to you to hold and you held me tightly and you want to kiss my finger too When I wrap you in my arms I felt that my dream come true We waited for you so long and your arrival made our house lighten God has listen to our prayers and given you as his gift. I will be watching you growing up and teach you all the good things You will be learning all the best and I am sure that you will show me your best when you wear your cap and gown on your graduation day. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @2107 - Ravi Sathasivam

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Date: 11/19/2017 3:07:00 PM
A truly wonderful and tender poem, Ravi, and the imagery is just beautiful :)
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:26:00 AM
So emotional, Ravi, it's? such a joy to see your own come in to the world screaming full health. Then to watch every step they take and succeed is a blessing. Thank you for sharing Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/26/2017 6:31:00 AM
There is no joy so great as looking at a new baby make its wonderful appearance in the world. Ravi you have written this poem with such love. Brilliant and a fave...Maria
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/26/2017 11:47:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem.
Date: 10/22/2017 4:24:00 PM
The gift of a life, Ravi...a treasure beyond measure...you are truly fortunate my friend...great write about your baby boy...god bless...^WW^
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/26/2017 2:18:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem. Ravi
Date: 10/21/2017 8:18:00 AM
Wonderfully done! Only those who have been through that experience can truly appreciate the sentimental aspect of your beautiful poem dear, Ravi! Welcome!
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:18:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem. Ravi
Date: 10/15/2017 7:21:00 AM
Ahhh!! I enjoyed reading your proud father's poem..I know that is a special time in the lives of couples when they have a child and watching them grow up..There are hard times and good times but all parents make it through..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/26/2017 2:18:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem. Ravi
Date: 10/14/2017 11:22:00 PM
Children make us see the world in a whole new way, we want to leave it to them and see them prosper, your love shines in this poem!
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/26/2017 2:18:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem. Ravi
Date: 10/12/2017 8:27:00 PM
Such a nice tribute, Ravi. How old is your baby boy now?
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:18:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem. Ravi
Date: 10/12/2017 1:24:00 AM
Fantastic memory..... such an important moment in life.
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Date: 10/11/2017 2:41:00 PM
- A beautiful moment in life - A wonderful poem, Ravi - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 10/26/2017 2:17:00 AM
Thank you very my much my dearest friend. Appreciated your comment. Hugs and love xxxxx Ravi
Date: 10/11/2017 11:06:00 AM
Beautifully expressed sentiments, Ravi. I am sure you make a great father! Regards // paul
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:18:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem. Ravi
Date: 10/11/2017 7:43:00 AM
A beautiful moment to cherish forever..Wonderful write Ravi
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:19:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem. Ravi
Date: 10/11/2017 7:09:00 AM
A beautiful poem ! It reminds me of my grandhild and how i relived my how I relived my role as a father.
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:19:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem. Ravi
Date: 10/11/2017 5:04:00 AM
A very touching poem--very well written with such love and emotion! A pleasure to read, Ravi!
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Date: 10/26/2017 2:19:00 AM
Thank you very much my friend. Appreciated your comment on my poem. Ravi