Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Our 20th Anniversary- Qd

Parallel to loneliness was I,
then day broke and I awoke with ease-
     lovely Autumn breeze and cobalt sky,
joy prevails and hopelessness does cease.

     A day when weeping willows don’t cry,
tangerine sunset between the trees-
          smiles resound in love we can’t deny,
we hold hands swearing true guarantees.

                                   Beautiful day renewing our vows.



Queen Of Day 9 x 9 Poetry Contest
Charles Messina
September 19, 2019

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Jan Allison October 27, 2019 at 5:57 PM I especially love the second stanza Luloo and many congrats on your win and your long and happy marriage too:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper October 20, 2019 at 4:18 PM Beautiful verse, Laura, congratulations on your win. Hugs dear friend

Line Gauthier October 19, 2019 at 9:15 AM Congrats on your win, Lu Loo. Love the line "A day when weeping willows don’t cry" - Well penned. Beautiful Scars October 20, 2019 at 12:58 PM thank you lovely Line, hope all is well :)-luloo

Charles Messina October 19, 2019 at 7:45 AM Such a wonderful and beautiful write LU. I love the words you used to express this poem. Congratulations on your placement in my contest...also, Happy Anniversary when October comes. Hugs & Blessings ~Charlie Beautiful Scars October 20, 2019 at 12:58 PM thank you! It was the 12th...we had a great night. Daughter at grandma's and you know the rest...lol :) Thanks I am honored to place in this amazing contest :) -luloo

Regina Mcintosh September 19, 2019 at 8:40 AM This is awesome. Love it. I wish you the best in the contest. Blessings Beautiful Scars September 20, 2019 at 7:08 AM many thanks dear Regina :)-luloo

John Hamilton September 19, 2019 at 8:36 AM So nice Laura, congrats on a wonderful write, I enjoy when others experience true love and not disappointment in their marriage, we are approaching 25 years so I know the feeling well! Beautiful Scars September 20, 2019 at 7:08 AM aww awesome! We are only at 17 years this October, but that day will be the most beautiful day for us. 2022 will come quickly! thank you dear John :)-luloo

Caren Krutsinger September 19, 2019 at 7:44 AM Ah, beautifully done my friend. Bravo. Bravo. Beautiful Scars September 20, 2019 at 7:07 AM thank you! hugs and be blessed caring Caren :)-luloo